Research Paper Revision

timer Asked: Nov 29th, 2018
account_balance_wallet $60

Question description

I have a research paper about Pollution and Global Warming in the US, and I didn't get a good grade on it.

I need someone who could fix it and make it a strong and good research paper.

My instructor said:

What is your thesis?

I'm unsure of your organization here. The first two pages seems to just be background info, and nothing that's making a strong argument yet.

Most of this is just a summary of information, and not really a strong argument. How can you include more of a personal argument in this paper?

I have attached my research and a revision document.


Tutor Answer

School: Rice University


flag Report DMCA

Totally impressed with results!! :-)

Similar Questions
Hot Questions
Related Tags

Brown University

1271 Tutors

California Institute of Technology

2131 Tutors

Carnegie Mellon University

982 Tutors

Columbia University

1256 Tutors

Dartmouth University

2113 Tutors

Emory University

2279 Tutors

Harvard University

599 Tutors

Massachusetts Institute of Technology

2319 Tutors

New York University

1645 Tutors

Notre Dam University

1911 Tutors

Oklahoma University

2122 Tutors

Pennsylvania State University

932 Tutors

Princeton University

1211 Tutors

Stanford University

983 Tutors

University of California

1282 Tutors

Oxford University

123 Tutors

Yale University

2325 Tutors