Review Rough Drafts Essay

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ubub27

Humanities

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Please review and give a comment for those 2 rough draft essay ( 12-15 sentences each one )

https://www.dropbox.com/s/jftz24qrv39tz0e/ROUGH%20...

https://docs.google.com/document/d/11FDmYtnqjfe4TV...


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Comment on Othello Essay
I like the way you have started your essay on how Othello is one of Shakespeare's most highly
intense, constructed, tragedies, with no subplots and little humor to relieve the nervousness, This
captures the reader’s attention and creates the urge to read more.
However, there are various issues that you need to work on; first, check on the connection
between the sentences. For instance, I do not see how these two sentences in your introduction
are connected “Roderigo and Iago team up for d...


Anonymous
This is great! Exactly what I wanted.

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