In this assignment you will be
rewriting and critiquing the proposal provided. There are at least six
improvements to be made in the document. Your job is to identify the six
improvements and then, using track changes, rewrite or fix the error. Also,
using the comments tool, give a brief explanation to why it is wrong and why you
fixed it the way you did. Note: If your word processing program does not have
track changes, you will need to insert comments in brackets using red font at
the improvement location.
In your document, you should:
Identify at least six proposal weaknesses using track changes.
Include a critique paragraph of at least 150 words at the end of the
Discuss improvements for each of the weaknesses in your critique.
Ensure both the comments and critique are concise and
Your assignment must follow these formatting
Be typed, double spaced, using Times New Roman font (size 12), with one-inch
margins on all sides; references must follow APA or school-specific format.
Check with your professor for any additional instructions.
Include a cover page containing the title of the assignment, the student’s
name, the professor’s name, the course title, and the date. The cover page and
the reference page are not included in the required page
The specific course learning outcomes associated with this
Outline the strengths and opportunities for improvement of all
Revise draft documents to improve audience comprehension.
Employ correct Edited Standard Written English (ESWE).
Prepare proposals for technical products and/or services.
Use technology and information resources to research issues in technical
Write clearly and concisely about technical writing using proper writing
Grading for this assignment will be based on answer
quality, logic/organization of the paper, and language and writing skills, using
the following rubric.