Macbeth Essay Revision and Worksheet

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I have my macbeth essay completed and attached and got the following feedback:

Dialogue is attempted or missing from the rising action and falling action of the narrative.


Your revisions and edits should now be complete and you have a final, polished narrative to publish, or, in this case, to submit to your instructor for grading. Before submitting your narrative, you need to complete these tasks to analyze and reflect on your writing:

  1. Use the highlighting tool in your word processor to highlight at least five examples of vivid detail in your narrative.
  2. Use a different color to highlight at least five interesting verbs used in your writing.
  3. Use a third color to highlight your use of temporal words or transitions.
  4. Complete the Publishing your narrative worksheet.

Publishing Your Narrative Worksheet


Paste your highlighted narrative in this space. Provide a key so your instructor can tell which color highlighter you used for each category.



Reflection 1: Name the two people who reviewed your draft and discuss in a minimum of five sentences how their feedback helped you improve your writing.



Reflection 2: Compare your first draft and your final draft side-by-side. Discuss in at least five sentences the changes you made and why your final draft is an improvement over your first draft.

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Hohmann 1 Ronnie Hohmann British Literature Shawn Bailey 12/5/18 Macbeth Narrative Essay Today, Macbeth entered the dining room with this scared look on his face. I did not know what to say since a thought ran into my mind that my husband did something and he could not find the right manner to tell me. Ever since Banquo was murdered, whispers have been floating and I really do not know what to do. Macbeth has written that he is going to turn himself in as the guilt is killing him. Lady Macbeth enters the room waiting for Macbeth to greet her but then he never lays a glance on her. His grief is consuming him so much that he does not see Lady Macbeth close to him. Lady Macbeth hence tries to get him out of his thinking zone yet he does not answer. Lady Macbeth hence asks him whether the witches had prophesized to him again. Macbeth only looks up to her to give her the letter which he asks her to read. Finally, Macbeth confessed to me that he indeed murdered Banquo after sitting in there for some minutes while deciding whether he should tell me what happened. I cannot help but wonder what I will do once they start pointing fingers at the one that killed Banquo as the same one that killed King Duncan too. My heart starts pounding while my mind cannot help but run a million questions but then, I have to figure something out before all is too late. Tonight, Macbeth stopped me while I was sleep waking and walked me back to bed. I am very scared since the whispers seem to be getting louder. “Lady Macbeth has been sleep walking Hohmann 2 talking about blood and already, there has been unresolved murders which have happened”, whispered a man from the crowd. They will find out. I am going to pay for these two murders which have been unresolved. My hands start dripping in sweat and I can feel Lady Macbeth’s eyes burning through my soul as Banquo’s burial draws closer and closer. The thought of telling her what I have done is unimaginable since she could not even accept the guilt following Duncan’s murder. My wife turned to the chapel doors as we walked up and looked me in the eyes and just asked me whether I had something to do with any of that. I did not have much of answer and so the only thing I could do was just starring at her with no expression or emotions on my face which was very guilty. There were dozens of people for Banquo as we walked including Fleance. We walked past him as he sat on the front. On the way we shared about the nature and consequences of the murder with fingers being pointed to the three witches. I stayed as calm as I could and tried not to make any decisions that might be hasty and this played out even in the funeral because otherwise, the suspicions would shift back to Macbeth which is not what I wanted.
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