I need help on answering a job application question

Anonymous
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I am applying for an oil company and below is my answer of the following question "

Why are you applying for this employment opportunity?

"

I need you to paraphrase it and make it more convincing and professional please..

"My father has a construction company. so since I was a child he always takes me with him to his company and to the filed. so since I was a young I have that passion to be one of the most effective engineerings in the world. Also, I have learned many things from my father. For example how to deal with the employs and how to make the site a safe place to work on.

currently, I am studying construction Engineering right now and I will graduate soon. I want to work for Aramco because it is one of the biggest companies in the world and I am so excited to share my knowledge that I have from what I have studied at Arizona State University. I have taken many classes in safety and in leadership. So, I have very good knowledge of how to be a leader and make a difference in the filed."

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whgrab
School: Carnegie Mellon University

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Anonymous
Good stuff. Would use again.

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