Wrote a poem, I want to receive some feedback and ways to improve writing poems.

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Jun 27th, 2015

Thank you for the opportunity to help you with your question!

Well, your writing piece is a wonderful example of showing love towards the AlMighty. The lines written are perfect and go in synchro. But I suppose the poem would have been better if some words can be replaced by more rhymic phrases or terms.

Please let me know if you need any clarification. I'm always happy to answer your questions.
Jun 27th, 2015

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