Poetry Essay

Question Description
Here is your ESSAY 4, the poetry essay. After reading the directions carefully, and when you are finished writing, please submit the essay for grading.
ESSAY 4 DIRECTIONS
First, explain in simple contemporary language what is going on in each set of lines (or stanza)—write as if this were being said today in a local club or bar. In other words, change the language here from that of late 19th century England to that of a club in your city or region today.
Then explain about the narrator’s (the speaker's in the poem--not Thomas Hardy's) argument about why he killed the man. Then, based on his language and delivery, explain his argument--whether or not he feels he did the right thing when he killed the man. Finally, explain the narrator’s attitude (or feelings) toward war itself.
In your essay be specific. Use “proof” from the poem to show your argument or points. This proof will be specific statements the narrator makes.
“The Man He Killed” by Thomas Hardy
"Had he and I but met
By some old ancient inn,
We should have sat us down to wet
Right many a nipperkin! [a half pint of beer]
"But ranged as infantry,
And staring face to face,
I shot at him as he at me,
And killed him in his place.
"I shot him dead because —
Because he was my foe,
Just so: my foe of course he was;
That's clear enough; although
"He thought he'd 'list, perhaps, [list is slang for enlist]
Off-hand like — just as I —
Was out of work — had sold his traps — [trappings—his clothes, tools, belongings]
No other reason why.
"Yes; quaint and curious war is!
You shoot a fellow down
You'd treat if met where any bar is,
Or help to half-a-crown." [English coin, like saying a few bucks]
ESSAYS:
Please note on essays (if this applies to you):
1) All top material: your name, my name, course #, and date are on LEFT side top and dbl spaced in one vertical line Like this”
Your Name
Willey
Course #
Today’s date
Center title on this line
Start essay after indenting on this line
2) title is centered, NOT in bold, NOT in all caps, NOT underlined, not in quotes
3) the paper is left justified--not full justified
4) there are NO extra spaces, returns, etc above or under the title, between paragraphs, or anywhere else in the entire essay--only dbl spacing—all paragraphs must be indented
NOTE there is EXACTLY the same space between every line in the essay from top to bottom, no exceptions
5) you can use only ONE FONT, and only ONE SIZE FONT throughout the entire essay
6) commas and periods are always INSIDE quotation marks
7) page numbers must be in upper right corner ONLY
8) Here is a sample Documented essay in MLA style—note most essays you do not have to have ( ) for page numbers or a works cited—but the format is the same
Tutor Answer

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Surname 1
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Poetry Essay
In the poem "The Man He Killed" by Thomas Hardy, the speaker is deep in thought
regarding the fact he killed. His reflection explores another possibility of encounter that he
would have had with the man if they did not meet in war (Hardy). However, he remembers that
he was on a battlefield with the man, and both of them were exercising their duties as soldiers in
war. The speaker believes that if he met the man in a bar, they both would have had a great time
as they indulged in drinks. He tries to determine whether or not he had a reason for killing the
man and whether or not the reason is justified. Nonetheless, the reason he gives does not appear
to be concrete.
In the first stanza, the speaker begins his sentiments, and it seems as if he is talking to
another person. It is clear that he is speaking of another person he met in the past, and he wishes
they would have met in the bar. He says "Had he and I but met, By some old ancient inn, We
should have sat us down to wet, Right many a nipperkin!" (Hardy). Although in this stanza it is
still unclear that the speaker killed the man, he probably regrets the fact that he did not have a
chance to know the man better. Therefore, something dreadful must have happened to the man
for the speaker to show the disillusionment. The reader can tell that they met in a different
premise under unfortunate circumstances. The speaker sees that friendship was potential.
Surname 2
In the second stanza, the speaker says "But ranged as infantry, And staring face to face, I
shot at him as he at me, And killed him in his place" (Hardy). The stanza reveals why the speaker
is conflicted. The speaker was in a battle with the man because they fired shots at each other as
they were on different fronts. Each of them was fighting for survival, and the speaker managed to
kill the man. Therefore, it is highly likely that the two people were enemies of war. The battle
line-ups enabled them to see each other face to face before they engaged in the war. They were
"staring face to face" because they stood on opposite sides, and this gesture shows that they were
enemies. However, the fact that they were lined up as infantry shows that they were taking orders
from higher ranks, and they had no choice but to fight each other. They pledged allegiance to
their specific camps, and they had to be enemies to perform their duties. The reader can compare
their battle to a duel because only one of the two could come out alive. The speaker, thus,
achieved victory by killing the man.
In the third stanza, the speaker tries to give a justified reason for killing the man. He says,
"I shot him dead because — Because he was my foe, Just so: my foe of course he was; That's
clear enough;...




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