My Home Is My Sister Essay

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Hi

1-want you to put the first paragraph and the third one together

2-for the second one, i want you to tell a little story about your childhood.

3-and the third paragraph, i want you to talk about we you come to U.S, and mention that she taugh how to make Mac and cheese.

finally , you can add in the conclusion that you continue what you was star with her

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My Home Is My Sister

My sister is the closest person with whom I share all my secrets and beliefs.  We grew up together during childhood. We both moved to USA and got a scholarship but we have not seen each other face to face since she graduated in 2016 with a master’s degree in nursing. However, we communicate on a daily basis and hardly a day passes without checking on one another. My sister is talkative and charming, which makes her a jewel.

My sister is caring, hardworking and conscientious. She is like a mum and is always concerned about my wellbeing. She knows I am curious and adventurous and that is why we had a wonderful childhood together. We did daring things and she was always there to defend me when my curious behavior landed me in trouble. She feels responsible for my wellbeing and will do anything to ensure that I lead a good life. Sometimes I am worried that she cares too much about me, but I know I love her even more. 

My sister knows my secrets. She knows my love affairs, the things I like and dislike, as well as my strengths and weaknesses. I love her because out of all people; she can stand my anger and manage to bear my failings in life.  People say I am introverted, less outgoing and full of myself. On the contrary, I think most people fail to understand that sometimes I want my own space. The only person who knows this and makes me feel good about my nature is my sister. 

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Ridha Allashit
Dr. Osborne
English 101
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My Home Is My Sister
My sister is the closest person with whom I share all my secrets and beliefs. We grew up
together during childhood. We both moved to the USA and got a scholarship, but we have not
seen each other face to face since she graduated in 2016 with a master’s degree in nursing.
However, we communicate daily and hardly a day passes without checking on one another. My
sister is talkative and charming, which makes her a jewel. My sister knows my secrets. She
knows my love affairs, the things I like and dislike, as well as my strengths and weaknesses. I
love her because out of all people; she can stand my anger and manage to bear my failings in life.
People say I am introverted, less outgoing and full of myself. On the contrary, I think most
people fail to understand that sometimes I want my own space. The only person who knows this
and makes me feel good about my nature is my sister.
My sister is caring, hardworking and conscientious. She is like a mum and is always
concern...

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