personal essay

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This is a personal essay, I already write the outline, you can read it first, and base on this out line write an essay this is the requirment

Paper #1: Persuading others to embrace your center of the world.

In this paper, you will explain why a particular place is your center of the world and then try to convince your reader why they should add it to their "centers of the world" collection.

In other words, you need to explain BOTH why this place is your center of the world and what special lessons/insights you gained there AND why others should visit this place and what they might learn there. The lesson(s) that others could learn there should be a kind of “breakthrough” lesson, not something they could easily learn elsewhere.

The lessons and insights in the two parts of the paper should be different. You will use both personal anecdotes and examples as well as data from research to support your ideas.

  • The paper should be 5 pages minimum in length, have a clear introductory paragraph, comprehensive thesis statement, 3 main reasons to explain why this particular place is the “center of your world,”1-2 reasons why others should also be able to gain something valuable from your “center of the world,” and a conclusion.
  • Include clear examples from your own experience to support your ideas. Research data may also be included, but the description of how and why this place is considered to be your ‘center of the world’ must come from personal experience.
  • Any outside data should be cited properly using MLA citation style.
  • Type the paper in typical MLA format – see the syllabus and course pack for standard MLA paper format.
  • This paper should NOT read like a tourist information brochure. Instead, it should be a paper that ONLY YOU could write because the place you write about is unique to your own background and experiences.
  • While the topic of the essay is quite personal, it should still be written in a more formal academic essay style.
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    Outline my center of the world introduction Hook: When you ask someone where is your center of the world they might not answer you very quickly but if you ask them when you feel lonely and helpless where is your first place that you think I believe most people would think about home Background: when I was borned my family wasn’t wealthy, we lived in a small house but thats the place that i have the most happy memories with my parents, after I grow up our house became bigger and better but i dont feel that much happy than before Thesis: My center of the world is my first home after I have borned, because that s the place taht I grow up with my parents and learn a lot of truth in life and the place with a lot of good memories Body topic 1 The place I spend most of time with parents Detail:When I was little my parents spend more time with me than I grow up a, my parents work not very busy when I was little b,they like to take me to park and ocean on weekend topic2 I have a lot of happy childhood Detail: I have a lot of friends live nearby the house, we often play funny games chat even make trouble together. topic3 the placethat I learn most of the truth in life Detail: when I was little I am very naughty I like to make trouble then my parents always teach me alot a,(Try to make up some detail experience to show parents teach the truth for life to the child Topic4 the place that I spend most of the time lived in, the place that I have the most emotion (Try to come up something for this topic) Couclusion Restatement of thesis in different words Councluding thought My first home is the most important place for me it has too many of my memories even my family moved but we still keep that house for souvenir Also in this essay try to give some reason in the body part why I like to take my friend to this place ...
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    School: Cornell University


    Surname 1
    Student’s Name
    Professor’s Name
    My Center of the World
    The center of the world differs from one person to the next, however, the pure love and
    full support that people receive from their family members would cause them to refer home as
    their center of the world. The world outside one's home is chaotic and cruel and hence everybody
    needs a place that would anchor their believes and principles despite everything that goes on in
    their daily lives. During the early years of my life, my family was like any other middle-class
    family. We did not have extra money or property to spare, however, that home was and is still is
    my favorite place in the world. Despite the arguments that existed or even the disagreements that
    threatened to separate us, we were always happy. As years have progressed, my family has had
    access to bigger houses as my parents were promoted in jobs however, the new houses have
    never managed to replace the memories of my first home. My center of the world is my first
    home that is the place where I interacted with my parents daily and they managed to prepare me
    for the cruel world that I have faced over the years and I also experienced the unity that exists
    among family members.

    Surname 2

    Firstly, my first home provided an opportunity for me to interact daily with my parents
    and create family traditions that have faded over the years. At the time my parents did not have
    many responsibilities at work and hence they always ensured that they were present during
    dinner and they always insisted we sit on the dining table and everybody to give a review of their
    day. During the weekends my parents would plan for us to spend some time in the park or at the
    beach. The family outings would consist of family games where we would always compete. I
    was always paired with my father because everybody claimed that I was my ‘father’s most loved
    child’. this meant that my siblings would at times pick on me, however, my father would defend
    my innocence even though in some cases I was in the wrong. Some evenings we would along the

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