Draft paper needs corrections. Current work received score of 82%. There are a few notes from the evaluator in the margins of the paper. Below are additional issues with the work that needs correcting.
APA Sixth Edition Format
Cite all information obtained from a source. EX: discussion on the information age and technological advancements should be cited.
Use correct margins for the abstract page. Use correct margins for the start of your paper.
Parentheses follow the last word, the citation is not included within the parentheses.
Use transition sentences and subheadings to help with organization and flow.