Help with creative writing

Aug 15th, 2015
SoccerBoss
Category:
Writing
Price: $10 USD

Question description

THis is my story

JOURNAL ENTRY: A week after their wedding, Nolan and Amanda were filled with excitement and decided to go out for dinner to their favorite restaurant. As the couple strolled down the street, Jack, Amanda's ex-boyfriend emerged holding a gun in his hands. Jack hadn't taken his breakup with Amanda so lightly and wanted to get revenge against Amanda for dumping him. With a murderous look in his face, Jack pointed the gun towards Nolan ready to end Nolan's life in a flash. Nolan froze on his feet as he stared at Jack, his eyes filled with fear and despair. Amanda screamed at the top of her voice begging Jack to stop. As Nolan said his last words, a police car on patrol suddenly appeared from nowhere stopping Jack before he pulled the trigger. Amanda and Nolan remained glued on the spot, even after the police sirens had faded away, trying to digest the events that had just taken place. Jack's last words were, “You want to live happily ever after, not as long as I am alive. Both of you will die.”

PLOT: (Opening scene) The centers around a love triangle (Jack, Amanda and Nolan).  It includes a past relationship between Jack and Amanda and a new relationship between Amanda and Nolan.  Amanda and Nolan, a week after their wedding, go out to dinner and are excited and happy (opening scene). Jack shows up where Amanda and Nolan are and points a gun at them (opening conflict). Jack is not over the relationship with Amanda and he is seeking revenge against her (rising conflict).  She has moved on and even married someone else.  Jack will not allow Amanda to be happy since he is not happy so he tells them he will kill them both (rising conflict).  He will not let her go from the relationship, even though it is already over.  When the police happen to arrive just in time, they apprehend Jack and his plan to kill Amanda and Nolan is thwarted (climax).  Amanda and Nolan realize that they are safe and that Jack is now in the custody of the police (ending or resolution). 

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Now i need 

Choose point of view. Select a scene from your story and write it first from the point of view of Character A, using the “first person.” Then write the same scene from the point of view of Character B in the “third person.”

No copying need a page 

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