Peer Review Assignment

Aug 17th, 2015
KateS
Category:
Writing
Price: $10 USD

Question description

As you read a classmate’s paper, address these criteria:

  • Identify the course, assignment, and date.
  • Provide positive feedback, where appropriate, on the criteria.
  • Identify areas for improvement, where appropriate, and recommend improvements.  

The specific course learning outcomes associated with this assignment are:

  • Recognize the elements and correct use of a thesis statement. 
  • Recognize transitional words, phrases, and sentences.
  • Identify effective sentence variety and word choice. 
  • Identify positive qualities and opportunities for improvement in writing samples.
  • Analyze the rhetorical strategies of ethos, pathos, logos in writing samples and for incorporation into essays or presentations. 
  • Correct grammatical and stylistic errors consistent with Standard Written English
  • Recognize how to organize ideas with transitional words, phrases, and sentences.

I have attached the student's essay, Saving Your Life Should not be an Option, Wear a Helmet. (Latasha)

Please review the student's essay and see the other attachment, the Peer Review Feedback Form and fill it out. 

If you have any questions, please ask. Thanks!


Peer Review Feedback Form.docx 

Assn 4 Latasha.docx 


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