Babu and Jasmine, newlyweds, lived in a city next to the sea. They enjoyed the sun every day and ate the rich fruit that grew in the forest. They enjoyed shopping in the market at night and playing chess. One day, a magician came to the city and sold them a bottle of mint tea that he said would make them rich. They drank the tea, but it tasted metallic.
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