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You should be moving towards an academic tone with correct MLA citations in this assignment. You must use evidence from the text to ask questions, define issues, question dilemmas, or pose alternative readings of the text. We'll be focusing on skills of summarizing, paraphrasing, and quoting as we start to interact, interrogate, and investigate. The main focus is to consider how this essay is crafted and a conversation that interacts with the text. A clear argument should emerge even if it is implicit.

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Zhang 1 Qiaobai Zhang Emily Marie Brauer Writing 39A February 11, 2019 The Ones Who Walk Away from Omelas by Ursula Le Guin is a perfect commentary that operates and applies to a society that is based or founded in a capitalistic economy. Sometimes, we need to focus on making other people happy at the expense of our own happiness. This is an example of an important message that the author intends the readers to get by using the trolley problem in which we should forget our individual happiness and save the life of the child. It is entirely allegorical and depicts a culture in which the ignorance of the upper social class causes strife and anguish to the lower social level and is therefore correctly used in representing a society submerged in the dilemma of an unequal or uneven economic system (Ursula 33 ). A critical analysis of the individual characters in the story gives a scenario of differences and similarities of the people found in a particular society and how these similarities and differences affect the way people relate and communicate to one another. When reading this piece of literature, the primary intention of the reader is to let the audience understand how imbalanced or uneven economic and political systems can be used as instruments to thwart the freedom of people in lower social class as well as formulating strategies to ensure that such unfairness in the society is duly addressed. One of the main ideas that the author wants the reader to get from this piece of literature is the impact of preconceived notions in the society and how they affect the socio-political and economic relations among different members of the society. By using an allegory of happiness in the society, she successfully criticises the romanticised happiness in the community and how it is misinterpreted to ensure the ultimate suffering of a particular section of the society's social class, Zhang 2 precisely the lower income class (Heyley 21). The society's perception of happiness is quite uninteresting and uncalled for. There is a lot of pretence in the preconceived notion of happiness that does not reflect what happens in all the social classes found within a defined society. The author therefore successfully calls the readers to open up their minds and understand the essence of happiness in the society deeply. Precisely, she urges for a more profound and in-depth understanding of the fact that happiness in the society is a complex dilemma of emotions that continually relates to human sufferings especially those in the lower social classes. In conclusion, the narrator of this piece of literature clarifies the happiness that is perceived in the city and by its populace in entirety. Although the city is regarded as happy, they are neither unintelligent. This follows precisely form their difference in the understanding of what happiness means to them. Most of the city's residents understand happiness from a tripartite perspective. This means that they understand happiness as something that is unneccassy but quite destructive and destructive at the same time altogether. This leads to the revelation of the city’s dilemma and the imaginary status of happiness. The sufferings of the lower social class in their attempts to make the higher social class happy in this society is a representation of an unequal, discriminative and inconsiderate system where equity of humans remain a dream and an unrealistic step. It is therefore essential to the reader in the sense that the audience can compare Omelas society and do an evaluation to understand where their society currently stands. This can help the readers to have an objective approach of dealing with some of the preconceived notions that affect societal growth and development. Zhang 3 Works Cited Heyley, Jeanne. "What is an analysis from The Ones who walk away from Omelas?" (2018). Ursula , Le Guin K. The Ones Who Walk Away from Omelas Analysis. 2018.
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Zhang 1
Qiaobai Zhang
Emily Marie Brauer
Writing 39A
February 11, 2019
The Ones Who Walk Away from Omelas by Ursula Le Guin is a perfect commentary that
operates and applies to a society that is based or founded in a capitalistic economy. Sometimes,
we need to focus on making other people happy at the expense of our own happiness. This is an
example of an important message that the author intends the readers to get by using the trolley
problem in which we should forget our individual happiness and save the life of the child. It is
entirely allegorical and depicts a culture in which the ignorance of the upper social class causes
strife and anguish to the lower social level and is therefore correctly used in representing a society
submerged in the dilemma of an unequal or uneven economic system (Ursula 33 ). A critical
analysis of the individual characters in the story gives a scenario of differences and similarities of
the people found in a particular society and how these similarities and differences affect the way
people relate and communicat...


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