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  • your reasons for continuing your education
  • your specific educational objectives and how they will be served by the program to which you are applying
  • why these objectives are important for your personal, professional, or civic life
  • your strengths and weaknesses in academic work

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Statement of Purpose Ever since I was in high school, I have been dedicated myself to bio-genetic researches. I have found it intriguing to use computer programming in data analysis, as it involves the application of modern data processing in advanced biological researches. I still can remember the time when I first conducted the research guided by Dr. Zhihai Qin from the Institute of Biophysics of the Chinese Academy of Science about fusion protein in high school. Since then on, my dream of becoming a researcher in biology started. At that time, I had access to the most advanced biogenetic instruments and research approaches in China and made meaningful and influential achievements. It was exciting to complete my paper Construction of TNF –alpha and IL-6 Fusion Protein Gene Clone and honored to present my research results at the fifth Beijing Aoxiang Science Seminar. Motivated by the attainments, I was determined to pursue my career as a biomedical researcher because I knew that my work would benefit the whole world one day. Therefore, during my undergraduate period, I choose biological science as my major. After completing a genetics course in my sophomore year, I gradually discovered what I was interested in most, and focused my research on bioinformatics. In order to strengthen my ability in biomedical informatics field, firstly, I joined Dr. Michael Demetriou’s laboratory at UCI to start my undergraduate research. After three years of comprehensive studies, I published my paper, Rejuvenating Immunity to H1N1 Influenza-a in Aged Mice by Inhibiting N-Glycan Branching, on the Journal of Undergraduate Research in Biological Science in 2018 before I graduated. Moreover, although University of California, Irvine does not have major in biomedical informatics, I still took some courses which are relative to this field, such as computation biology, linear algebra, python introduction and computation system biology. Furthermore, I worked in Dr. Pierre Baldi’s lab, who focuses on his study in bioinformatics, for two quarters, during which I learned to use Cyber-T a web server which can do the differential analysis of highthroughput data collected from biological experiments. By combining computer tools with biological researches, I was able to summarize the data sets that I could not analyze before. From my undergraduate researches, I have not only gained a thorough grounding of biological science, which will pave the way for my further study of the MS program but also aid me to realize the importance of continuing study. At University of Chicago, while strengthening my biological research skills, I hope to obtain a better understanding of data analysis approaches that can be applied in various fields in my career. Thus, I intend to apply for the MS program in biomedical Informatics at University of Chicago to extend my education, which will equip me with essential skills and experience in biomedical researches that would facilitate the biomedical studies in my future career. Besides helping me to gain the enough knowledge and guiding my future pursuits, my undergraduate research and experience also presented my strengths and weaknesses in academic work. To be honest, I am not a very good programmer. I started learning my first programming language, Python, in my sophomore year. Comparing with other students who have already trained their programming ability since high school, apparently, I lack enough previous experience. Although, in the following two years, I tried my best and worked hard to learn the various computer silks such as Linux, Mathematica, R and Cyber-T, I still cannot claim I am a very good programmer. However, I believe my wet lab experience to some extent eases my shortage of programming. Working in Dr. Michael Demetriou’s lab teaches me a lot. Through a twoyear training, I achieved a certain proficiency in Polymerase chain reaction (PCR), flow cytometry and fluorescence-activated cell sorting (FACS), enzyme-linked immunosorbent assay (ELISA), gel electrophoresis, mice dissection, and frozen cells. Moreover, successfully completing the Excellence in Research Program in UCI which is one of the highest academic goals undergraduates can attain trained my ability to design, execute, and summarize an experiment. Comparing with most of undergraduate students, this experience improves my academic capacity. I could become more professional to conduct research, analyze the data sets, and write an academic paper. These strengths in academic work will be a very significant tool for my future study in University of Chicago. Among all the graduate school I am applying to, the biomedical informatics graduate program at University of Chicago attracts me the most. The excellent faculty staffs and strong academic background in here can provide me more chance to develop my future career. The capstone project offering me a chance to complete a biomedical informatics project under an industry or University partner, or with their workplace’s supervision catches my eye and inspires me to work hard to fulfill my dream. For example, through participating in Web-based tracking interface for resident acute acre surgery patients (TRACS), I could work with other excellent students and professors to help develop webbased database management system. Moreover, unified annotation database for nextgeneration sequence annotation is also a very intriguing project for me. If I have opportunity to join in this project, I could assist clinical genomics group by developing a new tool which handles the large volume of patient genetic data in healthcare system. Thus, immersing in biomedical informatics program at University of Chicago serves me many extraordinary sources and chances to gain some essential traits for my future pursuits, whatever in the professional academic research field or career field. As my dream career, biomedical informatics plays a critical role in my life. Since I was little, my open-minded parent instilled in me the beautiful world of science. For example, my dad, a computer programmer, taught me primary programming languages. I also received the birthday gift of a toy microscope from my parents at the age of six, which ignited my passion for biology. Therefore, since then on, dedicate my life to science firmly rooted in my mind. When I have entered the college, the opportunities to do research in the top labs in the world, learn from smart brains, and enjoy the interplay between theory and practice assisted me in finding my truly loved-biomedical informatics. Thus, I am confident that if I can pursue bioinformatics as my career, I could fulfill my dream to explore further in this domain and achieve a success in the biomedical informatics field.
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Statement of Purpose
The paper entitled; "The Statement of Purpose" is thorough and complete concerning the
topic. The topic explores the reasons and the motivating factors behind a particular pursuit. In
harmony with the same; therefore, have stated the field of study and exhaustively discussed the
reasons, the objectives and the setbacks I encountered in the course of study. Except for just a
few alternatives of vocabularies, word repetitions and excessive use of the passive voice, the
paper is grammatically eloquent. Sentence structures, diction and the flow of ideas are
professional.
Along with excellent grammar, I would say this paper is full of logic. It is free from
ambiguities, unrealistic statements, and fake imaginations. The author has given what’s practical
in real life application. The logical flow of ideas dating back from high school to the tertiary
institutions indicates the reality of what the student has been able to accomplish and is indeed
feasible.
Narrowing down to the actual ideas, I would say the work is pretty nice because I gave
enough of the reasons behind continuing my education. There are several such reasons but most
of all, my focus is benefiting the entire world in the days to come. In most cases, it is common
for students and the researchers to have selfish ambitions and focus most of their ...


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