Narrative Essay-First Paragraph

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I have to have a narrative essay for tomorrow and am terrible at writing. I think I have my first paragraph but I need someone to look over it and tell me things I need to change or add. Could I do that?

Sep 13th, 2015

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Sep 13th, 2015

"Sarah and I were joined at the hip ever since I could remember. We shared so many memories; we could both easily say we were best friends. We actually told people we were sisters and half the time they believed it. We were inseparable and were normally causing trouble wherever we were. We loved to mess with people."  Would this be a good first paragraph? what does it need?

Sep 13th, 2015

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