I have to have a narrative essay for tomorrow and am terrible at writing. I think I have my first paragraph but I need someone to look over it and tell me things I need to change or add. Could I do that?
"Sarah and I were joined at the hip
ever since I could remember. We shared so many memories; we could both easily
say we were best friends. We actually told people we were sisters and half the
time they believed it. We were inseparable and were normally causing trouble
wherever we were. We loved to mess with people." Would this be a good first paragraph? what does it need?