Narrative Essay-First Paragraph

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I have to have a narrative essay for tomorrow and am terrible at writing. I think I have my first paragraph but I need someone to look over it and tell me things I need to change or add. Could I do that?

Sep 13th, 2015

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Sep 13th, 2015

                      Important tips to note when writing a narative

a. Clarity should be a basic.

b. Use a dymanic choice of words.

c. Describe movement in abrief manner .

d. Use concrete details when describing an action or an experience.

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