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For Essay 4, return to Essay 2 (Narration) and rethink it as a cause and effect essay. You explored an event and the buildup to it. But what caused that event to happen? And what was the effect or aftermath? Extend your essay by explaining the story in terms of cause and effect, and leave the narrative in place, possibly as a long introduction to the analysis you'll perform to explain causes and effects. As you are working, take my feedback on your Essay 2 project and use it to create a new layer of descriptive detail so your described item is crystal clear and specific to your reader. This essay should be at least 750 words, and I expect you to correct all sentence level grammar issues I marked in my personal feedback.
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Jiangnan Fan
Professor Harris, P
ENG 1101
February 23, 2019
The Best Summer of my Childhood that Changed My Life
Every Chinese student looks forward to summer when there is no school, and they
get to engage in the fun activities they look ahead to. However, my early childhood was
very different and at first, I didn't experience the fun during summer as the other kids did.
This was because I mostly stayed with grandparents at Nan Tong, JiangSu during most of
my summer holidays. Of course, my grandparents were not the most fun people to be
around as a child who needed to have adventures and have fun during school holidays.
Everyone who knows JiangSu well will confess that it is not the liveliest place in the world,
but it worked just fine because my parents emphasized the value of family, and I had to
stay with my grandparents to ‘build a bond’ with them. However, this boredom changed
during the time when I stayed with my cousin, Billy, during summer. It remains one of the
be...