help needed in revising English essay

Oct 15th, 2015
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Frankie G Descriptive final draft.pdf

main idea I'm trying to portray is a lot of people are lucky with the lives they got it can always be worse be thankful for what you have 

i have my essay here written already i just need small editions added on it can anyone help

try to add a clear 



and conclusion, 

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