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Tommy Chen and I come from China, but we are from different cultural backgrounds. It is
important to understand and adapt to different cultures. As global citizens, we are aware of and
understand the wider world and our place in it. We take active roles in our community and work with
others to make the planet more equal, fair and sustainable (Oxfam, n.d). It is very important to be a
good global citizen, and this is one of the reasons why we created our own company. Many people think
of migrating to a better country or how to make their lives better. However, they should think more
about how to make their own country better and how to distribute those benefits to the world. For
example, being an actor or celebrity will make one have more money than a scientist. Many people
want to be celebrities overnight, but that is not the way people become wealthy or financially
independent. Making money in real estate will take a longer time than becoming famous in social media.
We always ...
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