this is the profs comments , you should look at it again - does it tell the story you want to tell? Is there anything you should take out? Is there anything you need to add?
Also, you will want a paragraph outlining "the conversations" that are going on about KSA-Yemen -- "Discussions about Yemen today usually focus on three [2? 4?] issues. Scholars like ___ and ___ talk about [something - culture? poverty? Iran?]. Others, like ___ and ___, focus on [what? Shia-Sunni? Al-Qaeda?]. Others, like ___, ___, and ___ focus on [whatever the other conversation is]. In this paper, I will [focus on culture... or "challenge those who focus on Iran... Or whatever you want to do" ---this paragraph tells the reader (1) what people are talking about about Yemen, and (2) what you want to add to the debate about Yemen.Also, you will want a paragraph (probably the second or third paragraph) that says "This paper begins by considering the current debates about Yemen (the paragraph I just described above - called the "literature review"). The paper will then [what does it talk about next?] Next, the paper will ...[what?]. Finally, the paper will conclude with ...[what is your conclusion?].