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Oct 22nd, 2015
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new revice oct9th for class 500 research.doc 

this is the profs comments , you should look at it again - does it tell the story you want to tell?  Is there anything you should take out?  Is there anything you need to add?
Also, you will want a paragraph outlining "the conversations" that are going on about KSA-Yemen -- "Discussions about Yemen today usually focus on three  [2? 4?] issues.  Scholars like ___ and ___ talk about [something - culture? poverty? Iran?].  Others, like ___ and ___, focus on [what? Shia-Sunni?  Al-Qaeda?].  Others, like ___, ___, and ___ focus on [whatever the other conversation is]. In this paper, I will [focus on culture...  or "challenge those who focus on Iran...  Or whatever you want to do"  ---this paragraph tells the reader (1) what people are talking about about Yemen, and (2) what you want to add to the debate about Yemen.Also, you will want a paragraph (probably the second or third paragraph) that says "This paper begins by considering the current debates about Yemen (the paragraph I just described above - called the "literature review").  The paper will then [what does it talk about next?]  Next, the paper will ...[what?].  Finally, the paper will conclude with ...[what is your conclusion?].

please revise that ?

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