English Department Grading Rubric. Created by the Composition Committee. In effect from the Fall 2011. A paper that does not respond to the prompt: F THESIS SUPPORT ORGANIZATION CRITICAL READING AND LANGUAGE THINKING SYNTAX, GRAMMAR A Thought-provoking Concrete examples Sophisticated understanding of Controlled, precise use Clearly Articulated from various sources progression of ideas reading(s) of language Insightful Well crafted transitions Addresses complexities Varied sentence Ample Effective introduction Accurate citation structure and Accurate body, and conclusion vocabulary Clearly Relevant Grammar and spelling almost always correct Well designed BClearly articulated Sufficient examples from various sources Mostly accurate Relevant Clear progression of ideas Clear transitions Clear introduction, body, and conclusion Good understanding of Appropriate use of peading(s) language Avoids stereotypes Good syntax and Accurate citation vocabulary Grammar and spelling mostly correct Adequate understanding of Adequate vocabulary reading(s) Errors in grammar, Relies on generalizations and/or syntax and spelling do stereotypes not hinder Mostly accurate citations understanding C Identifiable Adequate Some inaccuracies Mostly relevant Vague examples Repetitions Some contradictions Identifiable introduction, body, and conclusion Adequate transitions May be some digressions D Attempted Minimal Logically flawed inaccuracies Attempted introduction, body, and conclusion Few transitions May be numerous digressions Flawed understanding of reading(s) Oversimplifications Attempt at citation Limited vocabulary Errors in grammar, syntax and spelling do hinder understanding F None Contradictory Vague Irrelevant Many inaccuracies Extremely limited Non-existent Na introduction, body or conclusion Little to no transitions Little to no understanding or reading(s) Little to no citation Very limited vocabulary Errors in grammar, syntax and spelling severely hinder understanding This rubric attempts to make the grading criteria clear to both students and professors. Professors will use common sense when applying the rubric. A paper that shows/A work in Thesis. Support, Organization, Critical Reading and Thinking, but C work in Language Syntax and Grammar might reasonably receive an A- if it were a timed 90 minute in-class essay. If that same essay had the opportunity for at home revision, a B might reasonably be given. in their have we hould restate the question main some with women O have we can see women much are the women become Many How is the question B Women in Pousiness Life I would say women are at disadvantage to men o career. But it is only for tob career. Because went f pentaduca tage Because, life means not only gobcamper discuss about carreer in their ĵub, yong If kind of problem. If I gather problems under solot of header; they would be "gender roles", "society and "phsical situations" & Simultinously, men have ? similar problems but they can't race in this topic. 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