Professional E-Mail Response

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ENG 315 Professional Communications

Description

Due Week 2 and worth 100 points

Choose one of the professional scenarios provided in Blackboard under the Student Center tab, or click here to view them in a new window.

Write a Professional Email Message (in the form of Figure 5.1 on page 84 of BCOM9) from the perspective of a character in the scenario. The email should discuss the communication issue provided in the scenario and should be addressed to another character from the scenario.

The message should take the form of an email; however, you will submit your assignment to the online course shell.

The professional email message must adhere to the following requirements:

1. Content:

  1. Address the communication issue from the scenario.
  2. Request a face-to-face meeting to discuss the issue (at a specific time).
  3. Concentrate on the facts of the situation and avoid using overly emotional language.
  4. Assume your recipient is learning about the situation for the first time through your communication.

2. Format:

  1. Use a descriptive subject line or heading.
  2. Include an appropriate and professional greeting / salutation.
  3. Use email form including: To:, From:, Subject:, and Signature.

3. Clarity / Mechanics:

  1. Focus on clarity, writing mechanics, and professional language/style requirements.
  2. Run spell/grammar check before submitting.

This is the scenario I would like done

Paul works for the website division of SuperMega retail company. He receives an email late Friday afternoon that explains a new computer will launch at the end of next June and it will be in high demand with limited stock. Also contained in the three-page-message is that customers will be able to preorder the item 30 days before launch according to the production company. Paul is asked to create a landing page for consumers who are interested in learning more about the product.

By mistake, Paul sets up a preorder page for the product that afternoon (well in advance of the company authorized period) and late Friday evening consumers begin to preorder the product. Sharon, Vice President of Product Sales at SuperMega, learns of the error Saturday morning and calls Paul to arrange a meeting first thing Monday morning. Sharon explains to Paul on the phone that the company intends on canceling all of the preorders and Paul responds that the company should honor the preorders because it was not a consumer error. After a heated exchange, Paul hangs up on Sharon when she insists that the preorders will be canceled because of Paul’s error.

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Running head: PROFESSIONAL EMAIL

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Professional Email Writing
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PROFESSIONAL EMAIL

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To: Sharon (sharon@supermega.com)
From: Paul (paul27@supermega.com)
Subject: Apology for the Pre-order Page Altercation
Dear Mrs. Sharon,
I hope this finds you well. It is with utmost mortification that I write this email following the
last interaction we had on the phone. My conduc...


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