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Oct 30th, 2015
DreamIt
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Edit my work for puncuation, spelling errors and revise! My work is below. Please return as soon as possible. Thanks

 Summary

Daniel was a three year old boy when his parents were brutally killed by the Prayer, an evil alien. At the age of 15, Daniel decides to be a protector of the Earth. In Portland, Daniel deafeats number 19 on the List of the Alien Outlaws. Orkng Jllfgna had been successfully defeated by Daniel X. He works hard to one day kill The Prayer, the one who murdered his parents. 

Daniel has the powers to manipulate any object and to create any human being he wishes to. He travels to Los Angeles in search of Ergent Seth. Daniel continously dreams of the Prayer warning him to not go after Ergent Seth; number six on his list. 

Daniel has never been to his new school and is ready to start his journey. While he is heading to go home, he meets a girl named, Phoebe Cook. They start to share their interests with eachother. Phoebe explains how her sister was abducted. Daniel suspects that Seth has taken her away. They plot to go to Malibu to investigate the criminal act of Phoebe's missing sister, Allison. 

Daniel had been assisting Phoebe to find her missing sister. He did his best to help and he knew that it would feel harsh if his sister was gone. 

The next day, Daniel notices that Phoebe had dissapeared. He searches and continues to look for her, it felt like she teleported to another planet. Daniel finds Phoebe near his school, and she transforms, revealing herself as Ergent Seth. Phoebe had been in disguise. She shoots Daniel and puts him into a ship to transport him far away from Earth. 

He was now welcomed to Aplar Nok, his home planet. Daniel escapes from his cell and Ergent Seth is looking for him. A battle continues to happen between Daniel and an evil alien. Daniel turns into a tick inside Seth's ear. He later transforms into an elephant inside Seth's head, instantly killing him.

His journey outcomed in a succesful way. Daniel returns back to Earth and retiring as an alien hunter. He had acheived to kill the Prayer, the one who murdered his parents and oher cruel aliens. 


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