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Unit IV Research Paper Draft 1
Follow the directions below for the completion of your Research Paper Draft 1 (the review of
literature) for Unit IV. If you have questions, please email your professor for assistance. As
always, you may also seek out the guidance of the Success Center; the tutors are always there to
assist you with your writing and comprehension. You may submit writing assignments to the
Success Center by using a “Writing Center Request form” located on the myCSU Student Portal.
To submit a “Writing Center Request form,” log into the myCSU Student Portal, click on “Success
Center,” and then click on “Tutoring.” If you have questions concerning APA or your writing
assignment, you can contact the Success Center at teamsucceed@columbiasouthern.edu or
by phone at ext. 6538.
Purpose:
The purpose of Draft 1 is to build upon the Annotated Bibliography and to move forward in
drafting your final Research Paper.
Description:
In this assignment, you will build upon the summaries that you did for the Annotated Bibliography
for Unit III. Unlike the Annotated Bibliography, however, the Draft 1 of your Research Paper is
more than just a summary of sources. Instead, it is a conversation between sources wherein the
student author places his or her sources into a conversation about topics surrounding the issue.
You will need to review at least five academic sources for this assignment. You are not restricted
to the sources used in the Annotated Bibliography, but that would be a good place to start. The
length of the draft should be between 3-5 pages, not including the cover page or references page.
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Elements:
Your Draft 1 grade is largely based on your inclusion of several elements and the overall quality
of your writing. For assistance, you might want to refer to the examples in Chapter 20, Section
20g, of Strategies for Writing Successful Research Papers (pp. 438-444). Your Draft 1 must
contain the following elements.
NOTE: the following resources will provide you with guidance and examples that will help you as
you write your review of literature (underlined words link to .pdf documents):
• Click here to access a review of the literature example.
• Click here for a webinar on paraphrasing and summarizing.
1. Cover page and APA formatting:
You should include an APA-style cover page for your Draft 1. See the example on page 16 of The
CSU APA Guide (6th edition). Your cover page should include the following: the title of your
paper, your name, and the name of your university (Columbia Southern University). The running
head should include up to 50 characters from the title of the paper, along with a sequential page
number in the upper right-hand corner.
2. Review of literature:
Below are techniques for writing a review of literature.
• Consider the topics that your sources cover. Then make a list of those topics. Cluster the topics
together, and decide which sources speak to the same concerns.
• Decide which sources speak to the same issues, and decide which material from those sources
that you will include.
• When sources discuss the same topic but do not agree, you should still include them in the
same paragraph if you would like. There is nothing that says that two sources that disagree
cannot be presented in the same paragraph.
• Remember to transition between ideas, sources, and paragraphs. Check out the list of
transitional expressions on pp. 44-45 of The Little, Brown Compact Handbook with Exercises.
• Remember to include concise summaries of the material.
Avoid the following in a review of literature.
• Do not comment on the sources. Your job here is to present the material only, not to give your
take on what is has to say.
• Do not include your argument. You do not want to argue in the review of literature because you
are reviewing the literature, not asserting your argument. You will be able to argue for your
position later in the paper.
• Do not just insert the summary paragraphs from your Annotated Bibliography. The review of
literature is far more than just a list of paragraphs summarizing sources.
• Do not forget to cite your sources in text and to include a references page.
NOTE: “Integrating Literary Resources,” a webinar created by the Success Center, may help you
with your review of literature. Click here to view the webinar.
3. References:
Include a references list as the last page of the paper. See the example on pages 6, 7, and 21 of
The CSU APA Guide (6th edition). All entries are those that have been cited in the text. No others
are to be included. No textbooks should be included on the references list.
Information about accessing the Blackboard Grading Rubric for this assignment is provided below.
UNIT IV STUDY GUIDE
Writing the Literature Review
Course Learning Outcomes for Unit IV
Reading
Assignment
The Little, Brown
Compact Handbook with
Exercises
Upon completion of this unit, students should be able to:
1. Write a literature review while incorporating at least five academic
sources.
Unit Lesson
Chapter 30:
Pronoun Case,
Sections 30a-30d
Strategies for Writing
Successful Research
Papers
Chapter 20:
Reading and Evaluating
Sources, Section 20g
Chapter 12:
Alan Ehrenhalt, “The
Misguided Zeal of the
Privacy Lobby,”
pp. 270-273
Barbara Dority, “Halt and
Show Your Papers!”
pp. 273-278
The CSU Citation Guide
APA General
Information:
What is APA format and
why is it used? p. 4
Learning Activities
(Non-Graded)
See information below.
Part 1: How to Avoid Plagiarism while Drafting a Research Paper
Chapter 1 of The APA Style of Documentation: A Pocket Guide
For the remaining units in this course, you will be constructing, one section at a
time, your final research paper. At this point in your academic career, you have
likely heard of plagiarism several times, and in the least, you understand the
basic concepts of it. Each section of your paper will be scanned for plagiarism,
and even the cases of unintentional plagiarism will be dealt with on an
institutional level.
The important thing to keep in mind is that plagiarism does not have to be
something that you are unsure about. In addition to the APA information in the
unit reading, there is additional information available at the CSU Online Library
and through the Success Center’s Writing Center. Further, if you are ever
concerned about an APA question, you can always ask your professor for
assistance and clarification. The reading assignment for Part 2 of this unit will
also outline some specifics of APA style that can be lost when reading a
handbook. Again, take advantage of the resources you have early on in the
drafting process.
Part 2: Understanding APA Style and Convention
The CSU Citation Guide:
Please follow the link below to the guide created by CSU’s Success Center to
help you understand the implementation of the most recent edition of APA style.
Read through these conventions carefully, as you are beginning the process of
constructing your research paper for this course in this unit’s assignment. You
may even want to save this page to your browser so that you can return to this
electronic copy of APA style conventions later down the line.
https://mycsu.columbiasouthern.edu/student/learningresources/online/writing_re
sources/APA/
Part 3: Writing the Review of Literature
Chapter 20, Section 20g, of Strategies for Writing Successful Research Papers
While most students have written a paper sometime during their time as a
student, not everyone has written a review of literature, so the genre might be a
new form to some. The idea behind the review of literature is that you will be
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Key Terms
1. Case
2. Compound subjects or
objects
3. Empirical study
4. Object of a preposition
5. Object of verb
6. Objective case
7. Possessive case
8. Review article
9. Review of literature
10. Subject
11. Subject compliment
12. Subjective case
13. Theoretical articles
able to take the sources that you have read and annotated and move your
understanding of them beyond summary. While summary is still an element of
the review of literature, the main function of it is to place sources that are
discussing a similar point in conversation with one another. For example, if your
paper were about the danger of hydrogen cars, then one of the paragraphs of
your review of literature might be dedicated to those who argue that hydrogen is
a clean fuel, one to those who say that it is unsafe, one to the faults of other
alternative cars, and so on. The idea here is to cluster your source information
so that your sources are conversing about the points of the issue.
In addition to the Part 3 reading, you might take a look at pages 44-45 of The
Little, Brown Compact Handbook with Exercises. On these pages, you will find
transitional expressions that can aid you in transitioning between sources.
The example review of literature in the textbook is quite extensive. Usually, the
review of literature is not that lengthy, so it is likely that this example might be
better served as something for a 25-30 page research paper. You will not write a
paper of that length in this course, but you may be asked to write papers of that
length one day, so it is good to have an idea of what a review of literature might
look like. Note that the review of literature is clear about who owns the
information. The review of literature is not about what the author thinks or what
his or her argument is. It is all about the sources and what they have to say
about the topic. You will have your chance to write your argument soon enough,
but for now, you are only being asked to include source material.
Take a look at the first paragraph under “The Issues” on pages 439 of Strategies
for Writing Successful Research Papers. Notice the way that the paragraph is
put together. It begins with the author of the source and a short mention of her
credentials. That is followed by the title of her book, and a one-line summary.
After that summarizing or generalizing sentence, the student-author begins to
explain more about what Dr. Tannen means by her words, pulling a few key
terms from the text and carefully citing those. The next paragraph follows with a
smooth transition. Then the next source discussed, by Basow and Rubenfeld,
reinforces the claims made by Dr. Tannen. Note that at no time does the
student-author offer commentary or qualify the remarks.
So in this example, you can see that the review of literature is all about the
sources and the conversation around the topic. Begin with the summaries that
you did for the Annotated Bibliography, but do not just place the paragraphs from
the annotated bibliography together. Instead, transition the ideas and cluster the
discussions about particular issues. Always remember that if you have questions
regarding an assignment, or you are confused about a topic, ask your professor!
Your professor is an excellent source of information that can assist you with
projects, concepts, and questions.
Part 4: Unit Grammar Lesson: Pronoun Case
Chapter 30, Sections 30a-30d, of The Little, Brown Compact Handbook with
Exercises
Learning Activities (Non-Graded)
The Little, Brown Compact Handbook with Exercises
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Exercise 30.1: Choosing between subjective and objective pronouns,
p. 248
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Exercise 30.2: Choosing between who and whom, p. 250
Exercise 30.3: Sentence combining: Who versus whom, p. 250
Exercise 30.4: Choosing between subjective and objective pronouns,
p. 252
Exercise 30.5: Revising: Pronoun case, p. 252
Research Writing
Click here to access the MyCourseTools tutorial.
This online tutorial discusses the parts of a research paper, and steps and
strategies for writing a research paper. This information will be helpful as you
write your research paper for this course.
MyCourseTools:
http://media.pearsoncmg.com/pcp/pls/pls_mycoursetools/fufillment/mct_125668
9785_csu/eng_comp_1/lesson_11/default.htm
Apply What You Have Learned
Think of an interesting anecdote about something that happened when you were
together with a group of people—it could involve any group activity you enjoyed,
from an outing with friends to something that happened during a class. The
anecdote can relate something that was amusing, surprising, shocking, or
otherwise out of the ordinary. Write a one-page paper, telling the story as if you
were relating it to someone who was not there.
Make sure to use correct subjective and objective pronouns, as well as correct
pronoun case when telling your story. Also be careful to correctly use “who” and
“whom.” This activity will provide you with the opportunity to apply what you have
learned about pronouns in this unit, as well as practice your writing skills.
This activity is intended to give you the opportunity to apply what you have
learned and practice your writing skills. It is a nongraded activity, so you do not
have to submit it.
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