I need help to correct my essay about descriptions

Nov 9th, 2015
Price: $10 USD

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Here are some comments for your rough draft. First, don't put questions in your intro. The thesis should only be 1-2 sentences at the most. Don't add headings Thesis and Body. The paper needs to describe what you would do on your perfect day. Use lots of description. Look for places to add adjectives. You also need to make sure you proofread your paper. You will have until 5:00 pm on Tuesday (11/10) to submit your paper.

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