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1 Running Head: MULTIMODAL ARGUMENT Multimodal argument Bassam Al-Busaidi University of South Florida MULTIMODAL ARGUMENT 2 Hybrid cars are manufactured to address fuel issues as well as environmental conservation from emission. This is becoming relevant to the current generation and appears to be trendy. However, have you ever thought of the consequences that arise as a result of using such cars? Although these hybrid vehicles pose to be convenient to the consumer, it is important to understand the associated dangers that are faced as a result of their use. On the other hand, consumer safety issues are important aspects to be addressed to meet the convenience as well as curbing environmental issues, The American Bureau of Consumer Protection (ABCP) together with the Center for Automotive Research (CAR) ensures legal and ethical issues are observed in consumer protection. From the current report provided, ABCP has cited that hybrid vehicles are too much MULTIMODAL ARGUMENT 3 expensive to produce, purchase and maintain when compared to other non-hybrid cars. Additionally, they have no convincing reason for their production. On the other hand, CAR explains that hybrid cars expose uses to danger from high voltage batteries used as well as fatal accidents. Sports car companies would have no interest in hybrids following issues realized in the market. Federal agencies are mandated to protect consumers from exploitation, and other related issues. Lamborghini and Ferrari got no interest in the production of hybrid cars. From high production cost, the companies cannot make expected profits when they produce such cars. On the other hand, uses of such cars may lead to dangers and fatalities of accidents once they occur. Companies are committed to keeping their brands and producing cars that are simple to use by their consumers. System failures should not be issues of frustrations to consumers. Operations within the ethical and legal issues are essential to the future survival of automobile manufacturing companies. Can production relevancy lead to the manufacture of cars that endanger the consumers' life? Typically, every automobile manufacturer would wish to purchase vehicles whose use attract additional market demand. Compliance with federal consumer laws is also a guarantee for the future survival of a manufacturing company in the market. Are highbred cars addressing the need why they were manufactured? Prices remain the first consideration for every consumer while safety and security is an accompanying aspect that people tend to consider in different car models. Having realized issues of contention around hybrid cars, is there need to actually manufacture hybrid vehicles? Is taking this risk worth our life? The Bureau of Consumer Protection is concerned with the cost of hybrid vehicles. According to the national research council, hybrid cars are quite costly when compared to regular MULTIMODAL ARGUMENT 4 petrol cars. On the other hand, these cars are inventions whose maintenance requires a highly trained mechanic. Sometimes getting such mechanics may not be possible. The user of hybrid cars are exposed to high voltage that has health risks. Exposure to extreme currents disrupts the normal functioning of the body. The most convincing characteristic of hybrid cars is fuel saving efficiency and zero emission of carbon particle. This reduces the effects of global warming. Environmental concern has become an international concern that is promoted by both automobile and other industries to secure the future. However, CAR holds that hybrid uses high voltage batteries that produces over 30 volts that are used for propulsion. According to psychologists’ explanations on human body functions, subjecting the body to voltage beyond 12 is likely to affect the normal operations of the physical body. Additionally, they explain that the consequences are intense when the currents pass through the heart or brain of the users. Adverse consequences are faced when these organs are in the current pathways within high voltages. While focusing on the cost of production and purchase of hybrid cars, some people may be willing to pay the quoted prices in order to purchase hybrid vehicles. On the other hand, matters of concern such as fatality of accidents are inevitable from all angles. Exposure to high voltage may also lead to the slow but steady development of complications affecting the consumer. From the few production companies that make a hybrid vehicle, consumer experience need will provide the validity of the impacts in manufacturing hybrid cars (Tang et al, 2019). The available cases will be sufficient lesson for deterrence of others to be the victim who have strong financial abilities. According to the current state of the environment, the cost and maintenance of hybrid cars are sufficient for illustrating the future effects. The existing users will be used as the MULTIMODAL ARGUMENT 5 experimental case study for understanding the impacts of this innovation. However, the ability to understand issues realized from this innovation by inspiring a change. Consumers get to know the roles of federal agencies and consequences that they are likely to be subjected to. Adjusting from one form of environmental pollution to another is not the solution. Using petrol propelled vehicle has less impact on the environment compared to hybrid vehicles. Understanding the risks and benefits of using hybrid cars did not only demand time dedication but also well-conducted research that favored none of the sides. This was following conflicting views that were provided by CAR and ABCP. Similarity was drawn from two key issues that led to this conclusion. The Center for Automotive Research was primarily concerned with the safety of users holding that accidents were likely to be fatal as well as health issues associated with high voltage exposure. On the other hand, ABCP considered the financial cost for production, purchase and maintained. Resultant conclusions were then drawn from reviewing the two findings (Puchinger, 2019). From the finding, I concluded that hybrid vehicles manufacturing companies must comply with federal agency regulations. This entails the circulation of appropriate information on their cars and why consumers should go for them. By taking this step, the manufacturers will use low voltage batteries that have minimal effects on the uses (Axsen, Mountain & Jaccard, 2009). Similarly, informative rallies need to be organized by these companies to train consumers on the uses and nearest maintenance services to improve the user experience. Working in association with federal agencies will ensure effective training where consumers are made aware of the impacts of using hybrid vehicles. While the evidence on consequences of the hybrid vehicle is realized, what is your role as a consumer? Can it be worth suffering from products we feel should serve our needs? The MULTIMODAL ARGUMENT 6 ultimate goals of every buyer are to get the value of their money as well as wonderful experience from using hybrid cars. Consumers have a right to be provided with sufficient reasons for charging high prices for hybrid cars. Similarly, the consumer need to understand voltage levels of the cars that are using and emergency measures during accidents. Caring manufacturers are with your money so they should care for your life. To conclude, hybrid cars were invented to address fuel shortage issues. However, consumer protection is a matter of concern that must be considered. The findings from a review in CAR and ABCP shows similarity that brings a conclusion. Further improvement is still essential in the automobile industry. From the research conducted, areas for further studies that were identified are analysis on the adaptability of the user to petrol propelled the car and hybrid cars. User knowledge may improve the management issues leading to improved experience, low frustrations and a better understanding of first aid tips during accidents. MULTIMODAL ARGUMENT 7 Reference Axsen, J., Mountain, D. C., & Jaccard, M. (2009). Combining stated and revealed choice research to simulate the neighbor effect: The case of hybrid-electric vehicles. Resource and Energy Economics, 31(3), 221-238. Retrieved from: https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0928765509000037 Puchinger, J. (2019, February). Applications of operations research in urban mobility with a special focus on electric vehicles. In 20ème congrès annuel de la société Française de Recherche Opérationnelle et d’Aide à la Décision (ROADEF 2019). Retrieved from: https://hal.archives-ouvertes.fr/hal-02025327/ Tang, X., Zhang, D., Liu, T., Khajepour, A., Yu, H., & Wang, H. (2019). Research on the energy control of a dual-motor hybrid vehicle during engine start-stop process. Energy, 166, 1181-1193. Retrieved from: https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0360544218321261 Running Head: MULTIMODAL ARGUMENT Multimodal argument Bassam Al-Busaidi University of South Florida 1 MULTIMODAL ARGUMENT 2 Hybrid cars are manufactured to address fuel issues as well as environmental conservation from emission. This is becoming relevant to the current generation and appears to be trendy. However, have you ever thought of the consequences that arise as a result of using such cars? Although these hybrid vehicles pose to be convenient to the consumer, it is important to understand the associated dangers that are faced as a result of their use. On the other hand, consumer safety issues are important aspects to be addressed to meet the convenience as well as curbing environmental issues, The American Bureau of Consumer Protection (ABCP) together with the Center for Automotive Research (CAR) ensures legal and ethical issues are observed in consumer MULTIMODAL ARGUMENT 3 protection. From the current report provided, ABCP has cited that hybrid vehicles are too much expensive to produce, purchase and maintain when compared to other non-hybrid cars. Additionally, they have no convincing reason for their production. On the other hand, CAR explains that hybrid cars expose uses to danger from high voltage batteries used as well as fatal accidents. Sports car companies would have no interest in hybrids following issues realized in the market. Federal agencies are mandated to protect consumers from exploitation, and other related issues. Lamborghini and Ferrari got no interest in the production of hybrid cars. From high production cost, the companies cannot make expected profits when they produce such cars. On the other hand, uses of such cars may lead to dangers and fatalities of accidents once they occur. Companies are committed to keeping their brands and producing cars that are simple to use by their consumers. System failures should not be issues of frustrations to consumers. Operations within the ethical and legal issues are essential to the future survival of automobile manufacturing companies. Can production relevancy lead to the manufacture of cars that endanger the consumers' life? Typically, every automobile manufacturer would wish to purchase vehicles whose use attract additional market demand. Compliance with federal consumer laws is also a guarantee for the future survival of a manufacturing company in the market. Are highbred cars addressing the need why they were manufactured? Prices remain the first consideration for every consumer while safety and security is an accompanying aspect that people tend to consider in different car models. Having realized issues of contention around hybrid cars, is there need to actually manufacture hybrid vehicles? Is taking this risk worth our life? MULTIMODAL ARGUMENT 4 The Bureau of Consumer Protection is concerned with the cost of hybrid vehicles. According to the national research council, hybrid cars are quite costly when compared to regular petrol cars. On the other hand, these cars are inventions whose maintenance requires a highly trained mechanic. Sometimes getting such mechanics may not be possible. The user of hybrid cars are exposed to high voltage that has health risks. Exposure to extreme currents disrupts the normal functioning of the body. The most convincing characteristic of hybrid cars is fuel saving efficiency and zero emission of carbon particle. This reduces the effects of global warming. Environmental concern has become an international concern that is promoted by both automobile and other industries to secure the future. However, CAR holds that hybrid uses high voltage batteries that produces over 30 volts that are used for propulsion. According to psychologists’ explanations on human body functions, subjecting the body to voltage beyond 12 is likely to affect the normal operations of the physical body. Additionally, they explain that the consequences are intense when the currents pass through the heart or brain of the users. Adverse consequences are faced when these organs are in the current pathways within high voltages. While focusing on the cost of production and purchase of hybrid cars, some people may be willing to pay the quoted prices in order to purchase hybrid vehicles. On the other hand, matters of concern such as fatality of accidents are inevitable from all angles. Exposure to high voltage may also lead to the slow but steady development of complications affecting the consumer. From the few production companies that make a hybrid vehicle, consumer experience need will provide the validity of the impacts in manufacturing hybrid cars (Tang et al, 2019). The available cases will be sufficient lesson for deterrence of others to be the victim who have strong financial abilities. MULTIMODAL ARGUMENT 5 According to the current state of the environment, the cost and maintenance of hybrid cars are sufficient for illustrating the future effects. The existing users will be used as the experimental case study for understanding the impacts of this innovation. However, the ability to understand issues realized from this innovation by inspiring a change. Consumers get to know the roles of federal agencies and consequences that they are likely to be subjected to. Adjusting from one form of environmental pollution to another is not the solution. Using petrol propelled vehicle has less impact on the environment compared to hybrid vehicles. Understanding the risks and benefits of using hybrid cars did not only demand time dedication but also well-conducted research that favored none of the sides. This was following conflicting views that were provided by CAR and ABCP. Similarity was drawn from two key issues that led to this conclusion. The Center for Automotive Research was primarily concerned with the safety of users holding that accidents were likely to be fatal as well as health issues associated with high voltage exposure. On the other hand, ABCP considered the financial cost for production, purchase and maintained. Resultant conclusions were then drawn from reviewing the two findings (Puchinger, 2019). From the finding, I concluded that hybrid vehicles manufacturing companies must comply with federal agency regulations. This entails the circulation of appropriate information on their cars and why consumers should go for them. By taking this step, the manufacturers will use low voltage batteries that have minimal effects on the uses (Axsen, Mountain & Jaccard, 2009). Similarly, informative rallies need to be organized by these companies to train consumers on the uses and nearest maintenance services to improve the user experience. Working in association with federal agencies will ensure effective training where consumers are made aware of the impacts of using hybrid vehicles. MULTIMODAL ARGUMENT 6 While the evidence on consequences of the hybrid vehicle is realized, what is your role as a consumer? Can it be worth suffering from products we feel should serve our needs? The ultimate goals of every buyer are to get the value of their money as well as wonderful experience from using hybrid cars. Consumers have a right to be provided with sufficient reasons for charging high prices for hybrid cars. Similarly, the consumer need to understand voltage levels of the cars that are using and emergency measures during accidents. Caring manufacturers are with your money so they should care for your life. You might have to further explain this last sentence to the reader by giving an example. To conclude, hybrid cars were invented to address fuel shortage issues. However, consumer protection is a matter of concern that must be considered. The findings from a review in CAR and ABCP shows similarity that brings a conclusion. Further improvement is still essential in the automobile industry. From the research conducted, areas for further studies that were identified are analysis on the adaptability of the user to petrol propelled the car and hybrid cars. User knowledge may improve the management issues leading to improved experience, low frustrations and a better understanding of first aid tips during accidents. MULTIMODAL ARGUMENT 7 Reference Axsen, J., Mountain, D. C., & Jaccard, M. (2009). Combining stated and revealed choice research to simulate the neighbor effect: The case of hybrid-electric vehicles. Resource and Energy Economics, 31(3), 221-238. Retrieved from: https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0928765509000037 Puchinger, J. (2019, February). Applications of operations research in urban mobility with a special focus on electric vehicles. In 20ème congrès annuel de la société Française de Recherche Opérationnelle et d’Aide à la Décision (ROADEF 2019). Retrieved from: https://hal.archives-ouvertes.fr/hal-02025327/ Tang, X., Zhang, D., Liu, T., Khajepour, A., Yu, H., & Wang, H. (2019). Research on the energy control of a dual-motor hybrid vehicle during engine start-stop process. Energy, 166, 1181-1193. Retrieved from: https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0360544218321261 ...
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Hi, please see the attached paper. Have a look at it and in case of any edit, please let me know. Otherwise, it is my pleasure to have you as my buddy now and future. Until the next invite, Bye!

Running Head: MULTIMODAL ARGUMENT

Multimodal Argument
Bassam Al-Busaidi
University of South Florida

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MULTIMODAL ARGUMENT

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Multimodal Argument

Hybrid cars are manufactured to address fuel issues as well as environmental
conservation from emission and, it is becoming relevant to the current generation as they appear
to be trendier. However, have you ever thought of the consequences that arise as a result of using
such cars? Although these hybrid vehicles promise convenience to the consumer, it is necessary
to understand the associated dangers faced as a result of their use. On the other hand, consumer
safety issues are essential aspects which when addressed will improve convenience and help in
handling environmental matters.

The American Bureau of Consumer Protection (ABCP) together with the Center for
Automotive Research (CAR) ensures the adherence to legal and ethical issues in consumer

MULTIMODAL ARGUMENT

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protection. From the current report provided, ABCP cites that hybrid vehicles are too expensive
to produce, purchase and maintain as compared to other non-hybrid cars. Additionally, they have
no convincing reason for their production. On the other hand, CAR explains that hybrid cars
expose uses to dangers from high voltage batteries as well as fatal accidents. Sports car
companies should have no interest in hybrids following issues realized in the market. Federal
agencies have the mandate to protect consumers from exploitation, and other related problems.
Lamborghini and Ferrari have no interest in the production of hybrid cars. From high
production cost, the companies cannot make expected profits when they produce such vehicles.
On the other hand, the use of such automobiles may lead to dangers and fatalities of accidents
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