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For question #1.) TRUE. Yes it would make scientific writing more interesting and fun if we do include some anthropomorphism in the ideas. Wouldn't it be funny if the moon can smile like a human? That makes writing interesting.
For questions #2.) Choice C . Shows redundancy in language Notice the sentence: "A total of 68 participants joined the group." The redundant phrase is "A total of "
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