my paper is on "Ethics of Jim crow by Richard Wrights" is a essay story you can read summary search on google if you want. My paper compares the "Ethics of jim crow by Richard Wrights" to similarities of Jim crow laws, Discrimination against blacks, stop and frisk law and police brutality.
Correct this final research paper try to switch the conclusion ending part with thesis intro just look at pictures on bottom for corrections that have to be made! Make changes to (MLA) syntax citations because they are written wrong! To much repetition in paper! Switch things around by coping and pasting! There are many mistakes that are just a manner of switching things around and coping and pasting it and repositioning the paper! Read the teachers comments for making the corrections. The final grade was bad please try to make it an "A" paper. Please make the best to correct it and make it a good paper.
THESE PIC ARE THE MISTAKES TEACHER MENTIONED ON MY PAPER