Need help wording my thesis clearly and wondering if it makes sense.

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Isolation can lead to self-inflicted suffering; however, once people become aware of their suffering, they can choose to end it through death and resurrect to become the truest form of themselves, thus living  to their fullest potential.  this is my thesis for an essay my main arguments concern isolation, suffering, death, ressurection. my essay question is evaluate the necessity of self destruction in seeking the truth. i was trying to go with the "you must die while you are alive to be free".

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Dark_One
School: Purdue University

Thank you for the opportunity to help you with your question!

The only thing I see is punctuation errors. Other than that it looks great!

Corrected;

Isolation can lead to self-inflicted suffering, however once people become aware of their suffering they can choose to end it through death and resurrect to become the truest form of themselves, thus living  to their fullest potential.

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