Need help to make some changes on a an Argument essay

Dec 7th, 2015
Anonymous
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Price: $10 USD

Question description

Hi, I wrote an essay about 'Is cheating out of control?' and it needs a lot of changes.

I put the teacher comments for the changes

Introduction:

  Include an “everyone” statement or hook.

  Give background information

  Thesis statement goes at the end, and it should take a stand about something.

Body paragraphs (3):

  Counterargument

  Rebuttal

  Your argument

  Be sure any examples are explained completely.

Conclusion:

  No new information

  Restate thesis


It's due Monday at 8PM

argument_essay___khalid_alhawas.docx

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