Khalid Alhawas EL 110 Ms. Groves 10.14.15 Is cheating out of control? Some time ago cheating was uncommon in schools, but now cheating is so common that most students do it and they do not even know what are they doing. That is a serious problem that we have to solve it right away. One kind of cheating is that sometimes we meet and copying other's assignment as our own. Another kind of cheating is in the test or exam by copying from old exam or test bank by the phone. Cheating is completely wrong and that will affect your knowledge and you won’t learn anything. Cheating in schools is become a common phenomenon in all types of an assignment and exams. First of all, some people said cheating is lawful activity because it can lead us to be successful in school, so that makes our families happy and success. Also, they can get good grades for their classes by cheating, so this makes their life less painful. In the same way, they said by getting good grades, we could find a good job with higher salary, so that can makes our life easier than some people who struggling to find a job by their lower grades. So they think by cheating will get everything such as good score, wonderful job and happy life. Actually, Cheating is completely wrong whether in tests or assignments. Also, cheating will never help them with their career and knowledge, so that will affect their knowledge and they will gain nothing. Cheating will make their life easier but they will be struggling in some cases such as how to make an interview, and how to deal with work. They will have some difficulties to answer an interview’s questions, and they will have a lot of issues if they pass the interview because they cannot deal with work, and they do not know how things are going. In fact, they did not deserve the grades that they got them from school. Our society appears to trust that the more material riches you have, the more successful you are. This truly bothers me because many people become successful by cheating and copying others work. If you copy someone else’s work, you do not learn anything from your classes or lectures. When you have assignments you have to understand it well, you have to learn, to write, to make your personal ideas. By cheating, it means that you do not respect your self and also your ability. If you need to be successful, you do not need to cheating, you to work more and more. In summary, cheating is totally wrong because you won’t understand the assignments, so you cannot do well in your exams. That will affect your thinking and your knowledge. You must to avoid cheating to help you with your life goals and to gain a lot of information to help you with your career. You have to focus on learning not cheating to have good education. By studying hard and focusing on your education you won’t have to cheat in your assignments or exams. Finally, teachers and professors should focus on that and finding solves for this problem. General Comments Text Comment What you need to really look at is counterargument and argument. You put all your counterargument in body point one. What you need is 1 sentence of counterargument, then a sentence of rebuttal, then the rest of the paragraph will state the rest of your argument. Work on that first, and then we can talk about the grammar and such.
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