this is a paper that require some fixing, its an argumentative essay.
but she wants the body paragraph to start with the counter argument then the argument and the rebuttal. the ideas has to be changed and connected to the topic. clarify some of the sentences and make sure of the grammar mistakes. basically rewrite most of things that are not clear and make sure that is related to the topic. it should not be very advance, but it has to be good and simple.