I need someone to help me revise my ethic's paper: Force feeding prisoners in Guantanamo bay

Dec 21st, 2015
Price: $50 USD

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Here's the link to the paper


and here's a link to essentially the same thing, but i made a few changes to the odd wording in some spots as you'll see (done by another tutor, not me)

ok save.doc 

Essentially I want to get this research paper on ethic issues, mine was the medical unethicality of force feeding prisoners at guananamo bay for my freshman ethics class, completely ready to be handed in. So as you'll see there's many little continuity errors  that need to be fixed, as well as some grammatical errors. Also just do what you need to do to make is sound overall more clear and concise, because that's my biggest worry as of now. Also, if you could, improve on the text in general to make it sound polished, so feel free to add anything you feel would improve it's quality. 

Thanks again!

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