Peer Review two essay

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essay I will send a doc

  1. What is the thesis? Is it clear in the paper?
  2. Does the introduction get your attention? How? Can it be improved?
  3. Does each paragraph have a topic sentence?
  4. Does each paragraph have support/evidence? (Descriptive language)
  5. Are there strong/interesting transitions? Circle the transitions. Does the essay flow or is it stilted?
  6. Does the essay have a strong conclusion? Does the author prove his/her thesis?
  7. What part of the essay do you think is least effective and needs work? Please make helpful suggestions for improvement.
  8. What part do you think is most effective? Explain why.
  9. Is the paper MLA formatted?

Tutor Answer

School: Boston College


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Multiple structural errors coupled with a total disregard of paper format makes the work
difficult to comprehend. Also, the general rule is that, academic papers must have an
introduction and a clear thesis statement aimed to convince the audience on a phenomenon using
evidences rather than personal opinion. In general, the paper is poorly written, hence does not
qualify to be considered an academic work.
To begin, the writer does not understand the structure of an academic paper. In MLA
format, the header should have a page number and the author’s surname. The title should be
placed just before the introductory paragraph. It ...

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