article revision(200 words)

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Please correct this short article for me.please check the grammer and make the sentence make a sence.

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After reading my classmate’s draft and watch the video about “the known- new contract” I changed my article’s theme and purpose. I feel like my article was strayed off topic,So I decided to incorporate the element of media in my paper. I decided to change my topic to “The Internet and the Impact of Substance Use Disorders on Families and Children” I begin to think about how to improve my sentence and I tried to add more information about the influence of media in the article and highlight the role of the media in the spread of drugs. Now my article still needs to make some adjustment. According to the video “the known- new contract” I tried to convert more information and new ideas to reader. I did more research online and focus on how the internet have a tremendous effect on substance abuse in young people and their families, such as, Many information on the Internet that lures young people to use drugs, Young people can easily buy drugs online, I also try to make a well-worn subject fresh and delay known information unfamiliar. There is an example how I improve my sentence. The drug mostly used by teens is marijuana (From the draft). Through my research, I have realized that substance use disorders have a prolonged effect on the individual and family systems, which also includes the children. Young adolescents tend to favor inhalant substances, so marijuana is the most common and most accessible to children.(after improve)
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Discussion: Improvements in my Draft
After reading my classmate’s draft and watching “the known- new contract” video, I have
now decided to change my ar...


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