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Some of them are already written and completed just need to be rewritten to a professional level. there are some that needs more sentences to make the minimum requirements. I just am having trouble writting this. I'm better at eexplaning in words than writing and explaninng so i need a tutor who is communicativee that way we may do this together since this is a personal essays.



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IMM 5490 (04-2008) E SPONSORED SPOUSE / PARTNER QUESTIONNAIRE The applicant 6. Give any additional details describing the circumstance of your first meeting with your sponsor. . Please write a text around 15 to 30 lines to explain in detail about the circumstance of your first meeting with your sponsor. Please indicate the date, the place, the name of the person who introduce you to your sponsor, etc. Explain what happened during the first meeting and what was the source of attraction between you and your spouse. Mention your impression and feelings towards your spouse. Finally, mention the circumstance at the end of this meeting My wife and I met in college, Central Texas College. We met on 2012 september, it was about a month into college. I first meet my wife at the cafeteria. I was eating lunch with my friend Yongho Jeong when my wife approach us to say hello to her friend Yongho and Yongho introduced us to each other. I asked her about her teddy bear cellphone case and just like that we naturally started talking and we were left together since Yongho had to return to class. As we were talking, we noticed we shared lots of common interest. I spent my childhood in United Kingdom, and she spent her childhood in Canada, but both have Korean nationality. Which attracted both of us together. She had a doctor’s appointment. We both didn’t want to leave and wanted to continue having conversations, unfortunately our first meeting had to come to an end 9. Development of your relationship Please write a test around 30 to 45 lines which explains the development of your relationship, your first meeting until now. Explain the evolution of your feelings towards your spouse in your relationship. Mention about the hard times of your relationship, big decisions that you have took. Also mention your dates, outings, and trips. Did you meet your spouse family? Did your spouse meet your family? What made you decide to propose for marriage? Was it difficult to continue your relationship since you are far away from each other? How did you overcome the distance problem when you are not together (msn messenger, web cam, phone, emails, etc...)? 1 IMM 5490 (04-2008) E SPONSORED SPOUSE / PARTNER QUESTIONNAIRE The applicant The development of our relationship was very good because we didn’t need to be separated. We were both living with our parents, both going to the same school, also attended some classes together. We would have our schedule to where we would both be going to classes and finishing around the same time so that we may do our homework together and hangout together. 14. Celebration of the engagement Please write a text around 30 lines that explain how the celebration took place. Provide details on date, location, number of attendees, member of the family attended, etc... Mention your feelings during the ceremony. You can also talk about the preparation of the ceremony. Please mention in detail. If a formal ceremony did not take place, explain why not. We had a rather special engagement. We were only 20 years old. I knew she was the one from day one. When it was our 100th day I proposed and asked her to be engaged with me. It was January 19th, 2013, her first birthday with me. I told her I needed to go get more snacks for the party and left for a bit. I called her to tell her that I was pulled over and she needed to come get me. She was very naive. She felt for lies for my surprise. The truth was I spent that time setting up a little event so that I can give her our engagement ring. It was held at the dog park near her house. She came out looking very worried than I surprised her with Roses, candles, dolls and a ring. She was startled 2 IMM 5490 (04-2008) E SPONSORED SPOUSE / PARTNER QUESTIONNAIRE The applicant because she never expected it since I was her first boyfriend. She finally said yes and went back to her birthday party. Our parents were not aware because it was just something, we promised each other. Also, because we knew everyone would think it was another phase of love and we didn't want those kinds of reactions since we were only 20 years old. Also, it was just more important we knew how much we meant to each other. Even looking back now I treasure the memories we have together even if we didn't have our official engagement. Our young love memories make it more treasonable 15. Celebration of the marriage Please write a text around 30 lines that explains how the marriage ceremony took place. Provide details on date, location, number of attendees, family members attended, etc... Specify the religion in which the marriage was performed and what religion you and your spouse belong to. Mention about your feelings during the ceremony. You can also talk about the preparation. If your spouse’s family did not attend the ceremony, will you organize a celebration in Canada later on? Please mention in detail. If a formal ceremony did not take place, explain why not. Our marriage took place at the church we had been attending with her family. The date of our marriage ceremoy was on september 15th 2018. We originally wanted to get married on september 13th on our anniversary but it fell on a week day so we picked the following saturday. There was about 200 people 3 IMM 5490 (04-2008) E SPONSORED SPOUSE / PARTNER QUESTIONNAIRE The applicant to celebrate our wedding. We had family members that flew to Texas to come to our wedding. We had my grandmother and my uncle who flew from Korea. My step grandmother and grandfather that flew from Oregon. Our family are both christians therefore we got married at a christian church. It was an overwhelming ceremony. Just like any other wedding it was a hectic preparation with families coming from different state and country. Although it wasnt easy we ¼were truly blessed by our family and friends who's always been there for us to help in any way for the wedding. We had at least 5 different ladies offering to do the flowers for our wedding. The flowers of the whole wedding and reception was done by my step grandmother she wanted to make the wedding special for us. During the ceremony It was hard to keep 4 IMM 5490 (04-2008) E SPONSORED SPOUSE / PARTNER QUESTIONNAIRE The applicant a poker face when her father hugged me before handing her hands to me. I could never forget that moment. 18. Was there a reception? Please write a text around 30 lines that explains how the marriage ceremony took place. Provide details on date, location, number of attendees, family members attended, etc... Specify the religion in which the marriage was performed and what religion you and your spouse belong to. Mention 5 IMM 5490 (04-2008) E SPONSORED SPOUSE / PARTNER QUESTIONNAIRE The applicant about your feelings during the ceremony. You can also talk about the preparation. If your spouse’s family did not attend the ceremony, will you organize a celebration in Canada later on? Please mention in detail. We had two reception after the party. One for all the people who have came to our wedding and the second one for dinner time for our close family and friends. Both of the receptions were held the same day on September 15th, 2018. For the first reception it was held at a buffet called Asian Buffet. For our first reception we encountered a bit of an issue with wedding cake. There was a mistake on the order, and they did not make the cake. Therefore Yeonghee Seo, my mother bought 5 different cake so everyone can have cake. We ended up with so much cake since it was a buffet and there was dessert cake that was already being served. My wife and i were very touched how hard both our parents worked and put efforts toward our wedding. Without both our parents wedding would not have been possible. For our second reception we invited our close friends and family to have dinner party at my wife’s parents house. We had food, drinks and music. It was a great way for everyone to unite since I had my grandmothers from both sides and from completely different country. I was worried but it all worked out perfect 6 IMM 5490 (04-2008) E SPONSORED SPOUSE / PARTNER QUESTIONNAIRE The applicant because everyone enjoyed the food everyone gathered to celebrate and play some karaoke later that night. 19. Honeymoon Please write a text around 15 lines that explains what did you do during your honeymoon. Provide details on date, locations, activities that you did together, etc... Mention you feelings during this trip. We had the best honeymoon. On September 17th we went to Las Vegas for our honeymoon. We stayed at The Cosmopolitan of Las Vegas. We both wanted to stay at the suite, so we ended up getting an upgrade to the strip view suite. We 7 IMM 5490 (04-2008) E SPONSORED SPOUSE / PARTNER QUESTIONNAIRE The applicant went to go drop off our bags and went to go meet my wife’s uncle and aunt who resides in Las Vegas. They treated us to eat lunch and catched up. We explored and they left to go home. We headed to the strip to explore the night view and activities. After exploring the strip headed back to the hotel to spend some relaxing time back at the hotel and explored the hotel. We spent quite some time inside our hotel because the view of the hotel was unforgettably beautiful. Also, my wife and I were both tired from all the planning and the wedding took couple days exploring and relaxing. The next couple days we rented a convertible car to drive at night of Las Vegas. On September 19th we took a trip to Grand Canyon and the hover dam. When we were at the Grand Canyon the feeling was overwhelming. The Grand Canyon was so beautiful and being there now with my wife I was the happiest man it almost felt like a dream. When we got back from the Grand Canyon, we went to go see le reve at the Wynn. After the show we went to the old stripe which is also one of my wife’s and I favorite along with Grand Canyon. On our last day of the trip we missed our flight we went back to enjoy our final day. On 22 of September we went off to San Francisco to my mom’s house the next morning. During our stay at San Francisco we visited a wine factory. On September 24th we visited China town. On 25th we explored the famous pier. On September 26th we returned to Texas to her family’s house. 10. Was your relationship known to your close friends and family? If no, please explain why. Yes 11. Did your spouse meet any of your close friends or family? If no, please explain why. If yes, please give their names, their relationship to you and the date your spouse met them. NAME RELATIONSHIP TO YOU Yeong hee Seo Scott Hibbard Erafe Tosie Jr. Samantha Hurst Mother Stepfather Close Friend Closee Friend DATE SPOUSE MET (DAY/MONTH/YEAR) 15/october/2012 22/09/12 8 IMM 5490 (04-2008) E SPONSORED SPOUSE / PARTNER QUESTIONNAIRE The applicant 12. Who proposed the marriage? When and where did the proposal take place? I(Jungsub) proposed to my wife. The proposal took place at my house on my birthday. 16. Did your spouse have to travel to your country for the marriage? If yes, please provide the name and the relationship of this person to your or your spouse. No because we were both students in united states 17. Was your marriage arranged? (if yes, who arranged the marriage, when and where) Yes, it was arranged by the help of both our parents.??????????????????????????? 24. Has your spouse visited you during the period of your relationship? If no, explain why. If yes, please provide dates and length of visits, and if you stayed together at the same location during the visit. We have been together in united states the whole time of our relationship. 25. Have you visited your spouse during the period of your relationship? If no, explain why. If yes, please provide dates and length of visits, and if you stayed together at the same location during the visit. We have been together in united states the whole time of our relationship. 26. How do you and your spouse communicate when you are not together? How often and in what language? Everyday in English or Korean we use both. also, we used either discord kakao talk, Facebook messenger to video chat or voice chat. 27. Have you and your spouse lived together? If no, please explain why. If yes, please give dates of periods of cohabitation. No, my wife’s parents were quite traditional, so they wanted us to be able to move in after marriage and i respected that. 29. Are you living with someone other than your spouse? If yes, please give the name and relationship to you of the person(s) you live with. No 9
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6. Give any additional details describing the circumstance of your first
meeting with your sponsor.
. Please write a text around 15 to 30 lines to explain in detail about the
circumstance of your first meeting with your sponsor. Please indicate the date, the
place, the name of the person who introduce you to your sponsor, etc. Explain
what happened during the first meeting and what was the source of attraction
between you and your spouse. Mention your impression and feelings towards your
spouse. Finally, mention the circumstance at the end of this meeting
My wife and I met in college, the Central Texas College. We met in September of
2012. It was about a month into college. The first time I met my wife was in the
college cafeteria when I had gone there with my friend Yongo Jeong to eat lunch.
At the time, little did I know that the beautiful girl who approached us to say hello
to my friend Yongho was to be my future wife. After she approached our table to
say hi to my friend, Yongho took the chance to introduce me as well. After the
introduction had been made by my friend, I went to on to ask her about her teddy
bear cellphone case and it was then that we just felt a natural connection to each
other since we couldn’t stop talking even after Yongho had returned to class. As
we were talking, we noticed we shared lots of common interest. I spent my
childhood in United Kingdom, and she spent her childhood in Canada, but our
ethnic background was Korean. This common aspect made us interact as if we
had known each other for a very long time. Our strong connection to each is
evidenced by the fact that even though she had a doctor’s appointment we just
wanted to continue having a conversation, but unfortunately our first meeting had
to come to an end
9. Development of your relationship
Please write a test around 30 to 45 lines which explains the development of your
relationship, your first meeting until now. Explain the evolution of your feelings
towards your spouse in your relationship. Mention about the hard times of your
relationship, big decisions that you have took. Also mention your dates, outings,
and trips. Did you meet your spouse family? Did your spouse meet your family?
What made you decide to propose for marriage? Was it difficult to continue your
relationship since you are far away from each other? How did you overcome the
distance problem when you are not together (msn messenger, web cam, phone,
emails, etc...)?
Since the day I met my wife, our relationship was a close one. The development
of our relationship was very good because we never separated from one another.
We saw each other every day since we were going to the same school and even
attended the same classes. To some people, such a relationship may seem
tiresome but to us such a feeling never crossed our minds. We enjoyed every
single day that we spent together while accomplishing tasks together. Class work
became easier since we used our strengths and weaknesses to help each other
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excel in their class work. When we met, we were both still living with our parents,
but we still remained close to each other due to a schedule we had that enabled
us to finish our classes around the same time so that we may do our homework
together and hangout toge...


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