Exhibit Source with Primary Text Essay

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Before you start the actual writing about your chosen exhibit source, think about the functions that it can perform in your essay:

  • - Remember that an exhibit source is something that can serve as an example, something that you need to “curate” as one would an exhibit in a museum: introduce and represent it to the reader, analyze and interpret it, make claims about it, and show its relevance to the problem in question. In doing so, you advance your essay’s argument and develop your own thinking about the problem that you are grappling with.
  • - Because such sources are often visual, writers often use them in the opening of the essay to provide their audience with an image that embodies and/or illustrates the problem of the essay. Having a visual reference in the opening can help you grab your readers’ attention quickly. (You might consider the framing technique for your essay – coming back to the opening image again at the end of the essay, this time with a deeper understanding of it and/or something different that you can now point out about this image.)
  • - Exhibit sources can often help you appeal to readers’ emotions rather than mere logic, as well as employ the senses – auditory, visual, tactile, etc – to enrich your readers’ experience of your essay.
  • - You can place your work with the exhibit source in the middle of your essay, too, to help unpack and further illustrate an important claim that you are making. Such use of an exhibit source can serve to break the flow of text-heavy sources and provide a fresh way to engage with the concepts you are discussing.
  • - Whatever strategy you choose, remember that your exhibit source cannot be random: it has to be chosen carefully and be directly relevant to either the overall problem of your essay or the particular concept/ claim that you will discuss in relation to this source.Write 1-3 paragraphs about it. prioritize meaning and clarity over perfection of form at this point . Be creative in what exactly you want to say about the source; however, make sure to include the following:
  • - Represent the source to someone who has never seen it/ read it/ heard it
    - Explain how it is relevant to the problem/concept/claim
    - Use descriptive language, engage with the senses, create a visual for your reader
    - Make interpretive claims about it
    - Make a move to connect it to whatever you might want to discuss right after (start thinking about how to transition into whatever’s next.)

Note: the exhibit source is the attachment, and primary text is "Silence and the Notion of the Commons" written by Ursula Franklin. be sure to explore the relationship between the exhibit source and the primary text, how it supports the primary text.

the attachment is some ideas I have about the exhibit source, I would like you to read the instruction very carefully.

Here's the link of original exhibit source. https://pdfs.semanticscholar.org/9af1/cbff39ff8fb9576c5e0434536eb068d529f4.pdf


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Beausire, Jocelyn. "The Emancipation of Urban Noise: John Cage’s Music as Acoustic Ecology." Typically, the title “Silence and the Notion of the Commons” gives us the insight of what we are to expect in the article. The article entails the discussion of some of the achievements of Beausire. The influence that she has created over the years is critically analyzed and discussed at length. The paper avails measures that show mans’ creativity to the utter core. The implication of proving us with the knowledge of programmable and unprogrammable people is a notion that embraces the advancement of technology. Through the motif of addressing her audience in the first person, Franklin tries to achieve the attachment that is necessary for reaching the target audience (Beausire). The article is characterized by experimentations which are aimed at ensuring that the audience gets the message that is being communicated. The article aligns with my essay as a critical juncture that appreciates silence as the best remedy to evade the hustle and bustle of today’s society. The stipulation of trying to achieve a society that respects silence is significant as the author says. My essay will re-establish dispositions that embrace silence on various occasions, such as places of worship and at the workplace. As a scientist, Beausire critically champions the proliferation of inspiring my essay by indulging her audience in intense talks that impede practicability. It is thus mandatory for other firms to follow in the steps of such measures to create a society that understands the significance of respecting the need to give others the peace of mind that is required. The essay will show its expectations of the community in the face of advancing technology and exploration of science.
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In the exhibit source I chose for my essay, the author gives a summary of the article,
“Silence and the Notion of the Commons” by Franklin that highlights some of Beausire’
achievement. The author of the exhibit source starts by giving the readers a brief overview of the
article and in the second paragraph majors on highlighting how the selected article will be
helpful when writing his essay. Additionally, the author also highligh...


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