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Role of Surrogates in Emerging Adults’ Happiness
Recent studies show that emerging adults have adopted a new culture of recruiting their
surrogates to help in handling stress and responsibilities and boost their happiness. In the article,
“Reporting Live from Tomorrow”, by Daniel Gilbert, states that people use surrogates in their
daily lives for different reasons. The main idea is that surrogates are an important aspect in the
determination of future happiness. If people can have reliable surrogates, then they are likely to
achieve most of their goals and dreams. Marantz Henig, in his article, "What is about 20something", states that most young people are taking longer to reach their adulthood. “The
current world is not able to agree when someone can be said to be old enough to assume
adulthood roles”(Henig 206). For instance, in some states, at eighteen years they can vote, but
they can’t drink. However, he notes that treating these young people differently rather than fully
grown adults, would mean controlling, which grown people resist. He also states that the young
people in the 1960s and 1970s could complete some of the basic life milestones in their twenties.
However, the young people today have more decisions to make and their lives tend to have more
possibilities. For example, some take time with their education and are more likely to take longer
before they marry. According to Marantz, the later lifestyle is better and has more happiness.
This paper therefore discusses the role that surrogates have in emerging adults’ happiness.

The super-replications play a major role in the establishment of adulthood as a life stage.
Various super-replicators are passed from one generation to another. They represent something
like genes that parents pass to their children which may either be positive or negative. The main
issue about super-replicators is that they determine the kind of lifestyle that young people adopt.
They also determine the rate at which young people change into adults and can make their own
decisions, without the help from parents. If the level of information passed from the parents to
the children is immense, this makes it better for the children to make better and well-informed
decisions. Most of the decisions made by people are based on what they know about certain
issues. Every one person has a dream to achieve by the time they are getting to adulthood which
is enhanced by the surrogates. “Taking longer in school means that a process of sharing
information take...


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