Resume, Cover Letter and Job Advertise Editing


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We have to edit this paper

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Project #1 by Selin Erden Submission date: 05-Oct-2019 09:26PM (UTC-0500) Submission ID: 1186754177 File name: PROJECT1.docx (35.89K) Word count: 1413 Character count: 8540 1 2 3 5 8 9 10 12 14 15 18 Project #1 ORIGINALITY REPORT 57 % SIMILARITY INDEX 52% 0% 50% INTERNET SOURCES PUBLICATIONS STUDENT PAPERS PRIMARY SOURCES 1 Submitted to Texas A&M University, College Station 17% Student Paper 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 Internet Source Internet Source Submitted to Robertson College Student Paper Internet Source Internet Source Submitted to University of Southern Mississippi Student Paper Internet Source 13% 5% 4% 4% 3% 3% 1% 10 11 12 13 14 15 Internet Source 1% Submitted to University of Houston System 1% Student Paper 1% Internet Source 1% Internet Source 1% Internet Source 1% Internet Source 1% Internet Source Exclude quotes Off Exclude bibliography Off Exclude matches Off Project #1 GRADEMARK REPORT FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS 75 Instructor /100 PAGE 1 Comment 1 I suggest trying out other resume templates. Also, condense this to two pages, and see how much you can get on one page. Comment 2 Incorrect punctuation use. Comment 3 Avoid large blocks of text in your resume. It is meant to be easily scanned over for specific information, which is easier when everything is in bullet points or short sentences. Strikethrough. Comment 5 This is unprofessional. Move this to the next page, or bring up some of the sub-elements to this page. PAGE 2 PAGE 3 Strikethrough. Strikethrough. PAGE 4 Comment 8 Your documents should all be single-spaced. Comment 9 This is not a valid address. Comment 10 "Hiring Manager" or something similar. Strikethrough. Comment 12 "I am writing to apply for... as advertised on..." followed by a one-sentence summary of your experience. Strikethrough. Comment 14 Put in the first paragraph. Comment 15 This needs to be greatly expanded with specific examples that illustrate your experience. Your letter needs to stand on its own without your resume. Strikethrough. Strikethrough. PAGE 5 Comment 18 Why is this on its own page? PAGE 6 PAGE 7 PAGE 8 GRADING FORM: POWER WRITING RUBRIC SELIN ERDEN 75 FORMAT- 16 POINTS. Follows the typical expectations for letter, email, or memo format. 11 TONE/STYLE- 17 PTS. Displays professional tone and content. Language choices (such as level of formality, level of technicality) are appropriate for the audience and purpose. 14 AUDIENCE AWARE- 17 PTS Communicates the message persuasively by showing awareness of the expectations and needs of the audience. Appropriately clarifies for the audience the purpose of the document and what the reader should do after reading the document. 13 ORGANIZATION- 17 PTS. Organizes content clearly, logically, and persuasively. 13 CONCISION/DETAILS-17 PTS Shows awareness of how much detail is needed to make the document useful and informative, and how much would be more than the audience needs. 12 EDITING/GRAMMAR/MECH.-16 PTS. Displays concision, clarity, and fluency. Displays correct grammar and mechanics. 12 ...
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Languages: Fluent English and Turkish


I am a highly determined strong-minded with three years of working experience.
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C.T. Bauer College of business, University of Houston
and Training 2016current Bachelor of Business Administration and Finance
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Management of organizational relations.
Management of finances and organizational market.
Negotiations for business partnerships and expounding business networks.
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Management of operations risk and organizational compliance. .
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