Need finale draft for PSA part 1 finished.....

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Here is the link to my paper...

file:///C:/Users/jalia/Documents/ENG%20112/PSA%201%20draft-1570848332000.pdf


Here are the corrections i was giving on my paper......

1. This looks like an APA header. For this essay, we are doing MLA. I know it's confusing!

2. Awkward phrasing.

3. I would start your essay here.

4. I would take out references to what a PSA is since the Ad Council (your imagined audience) already knows. Rather I would be more open about what you want to focus on. What is the issue at hand and why does it demand attention?

5. Also, one thing to think about is what do you want your audience to do with the information? Since we can't always prevent mass shootings, maybe you can tell people what to do in case such a situation arises?

6. Source?

7. Source>

8. This is a good idea. However, PSAs can't change laws. Rather, they focus on behavior individuals can do. What can the average American do to change this situation?


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Name 1
Jaliah Jackson
Erin Wedehase
ENG 112
Date
Mass Shooting
Over the years there have been issues regarding the security of students in institutions
such as schools and universities. It mainly occurs due to the mass shootings that are happening
in these institutions mostly, universities. These announcements are primarily indicated in ads
such as televisions and newspapers. Covering of the issue in the media is of importance since
the activity assists in raising awareness concerning the topic. I would like to focus on the
subject of frequency and the effect of mass shooting on the public and state. The primary aim
of concentrating on the matter is to influence the implementation of policies concerning the
issue. Furthermore, I would like to educate the audience concerning appropriate intervention
and protective measures in the event of such a case. In consideration of the information
provided concerning mass shootings, another objective is to influence the public to take
personal protective measures against similar situations.
How long the issue has been going on
In my research, mass shootings often happen due to unknown circumstances by
individuals whose main aim is to create chaos in the community. According to Osuna (2019),
there have bee...


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