Is my thesis arguable? Thanks!

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Charles Darwin created a lasting impact on how differently we view humanity because he explored his own identity, which lead him to produce new theories of evolution and exchange those ideas with the public, therefore encountering the resistance to his beliefs.

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Another thing to watch is your use of "therefore". That term does mean "as a consequence" but it should be followed by a clause with a subject and verb. However, if you do that, the word should be preceded by a semicolon rather than a comma. those ideas with the public; therefore, he encountered the resistance to his beliefs that created the conditions for this lasting impact.However, the word "therefore" usually has a connotation of meaning more like "as a natural consequence of" and I feel it doesn't show the propulsion from the cause to the effect that you're looking for. I would recommend changing that term, perhaps to "thereby".I've enclosed an example outline you could possibly use, but it depends on what and how you will argue your points.

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Introduction
A. Statements that engage the reader, cause them to draw on personal experience
and/or knowledge, and lead to the main point of interest
B. Thesis statement: Charles Darwin created a lasting impact on how differently we
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