Description
Two critique letters ( 400- 500 words each) (use easy words, because I am an international student)
for each document, you will write an individual response to the story Written by your classmate. The focus of the letter can be on a number of things, including: the aboutness of the story, the strengths of the piece, and areas of the story you think could be strengthened. Be honest, respectful, and specific. As a member of the workshop, we want fellow writers to leave workshop excited to get back into their writing, not to leave defeated. We will talk about workshop etiquette in class.
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hello there, here is the complete paper. Go through it and in case of anything, feel free to to alert me.Regards
Running head: CRITIQUE RESPONSE
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Critique Response
Student Name
Institution Affiliation
CRITIQUE RESPONSE
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White walls by Martinez
The short story by Martinez begins with a clear illustration of the setting and the issues
going through the author's head. The author is effective in creating out a sense of where he is
describing the hospital setting and reflecting on his past. However, it remains a mystery how the
main character got to the hospital in the first place. This arouses my interest as I want to read on
to find out.
The use of flashback is honestly quite impressive. The writer mixes the present, the past,
and their mind perspective of things into the story. Flashback is mainly used to reveal the reason
why the author is in a hospital bed (Fielden, 2015). It becomes more evident that it is a man who
has been sexually assaulted by another man. The conflict is mainly developed in the feedback,
while the present painful state is depicted in the current dealings with the hospital environment.
However, the author could improve on their hook and not start directly telling the story
but strive to capture the reader's attention at the beginning. Another weakness of the author is the
intermittent interweave of the past, present,...
