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My previous paper and peer feedback is attached.
Persuasive Paper Part 2: Solution and Advantages
Due Week 7 and worth 200 points
Using feedback from your professor and classmates, revise Part 1 and develop the solution and identify the advantages of the solution. Note: The disadvantages or challenges with your answers will be in Part 3.
Write a six to eight (6-8) page paper in which you:
Provide Part I: Revision of A Problem Exists (3-4 pages)
1. Revise, using feedback from the professor and classmates, your Persuasive Paper Part I: A Problem Exists.
Develop Part 2: Solution to Problem and Advantages (3-4 pages for 6-8 pages total)
2. Include a defensible, relevant thesis statement clearly in the first paragraph. (The thesis statement may need to be modified to reflect added information and purpose of this part.)
3. Explain a detailed, viable solution that supports your thesis. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.
4. State, explain, and support the first advantage (economic, social, political, environmental, social, equitable, ethical/moral, etc.) to your solution. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.
5. State, explain, and support the second advantage (economic, social, political, environmental, social, equitable, ethical/moral, etc.) to your solution. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.
6. State, explain, and support the third (and fourth if desired) advantage (economic, social, political, environmental, social, equitable, ethical/moral, etc.) to your solution. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.
7. Use effective transitional words, phrases, and sentences.
8. Provide a concluding paragraph / transitional paragraph that summarizes the proposed solution and its advantages.
9. Develop a coherently structured paper with an introduction, body, and conclusion.
10. Use one (1) or more rhetorical strategies (ethos, logos, pathos) to explain advantages.
11. Support advantage claims with at least three (3) additional quality relevant references. Use at least six (6) total for Parts 1 and 2. Note: Wikipedia and other Websites do not qualify as academic resources.
Your assignment must follow these formatting guidelines:
- Be typed, double spaced, using Times New Roman font (size 12), with one-inch margins on all sides; citations and references must follow APA or school-specific format. Check with your professor for any additional instructions.
- Include a cover page containing the title of the assignment, the student’s name, the professor’s name, the course title, and the date. The cover page and the reference page are not included in the required assignment page length.
Note: Submit your assignment to the designated plagiarism program so that you can make revisions before submitting your paper to your professor.
The specific course learning outcomes associated with this assignment are:
- Recognize the elements and correct use of a thesis statement.
- Recognize the use of summary, paraphrasing, and quotation to communicate the main points of a text.
- Analyze the rhetorical strategies of ethos, pathos, logos in writing samples and for incorporation into essays or presentations.
- Correct grammatical and stylistic errors consistent with Standard Written English.
- Prepare a research project that supports an argument with structure and format appropriate to the genre.
- Revise drafts to improve clarity, support, and organization. Recognize how to organize ideas with transitional words, phrases, and sentences.
- Incorporate relevant, properly documented sources to substantiate ideas.
- Write clearly and concisely about selected topics using proper writing mechanics.
- Use technology and information resources to research selected issues for this course.
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Explanation & Answer
Running head: SOLUTION AND ADVANTAGES
Solution and Advantages
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SOLUTION AND ADVANTAGES
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As it has been noted, there is a large problem when it comes to the issue of treating
minors as adults in the court of law. This has been an issue because this treatment also continues
to the prisons where these minors are jailed together with mature people that commit other
offences (Myers, 2011). But there is a viable solution to all these problems. The most effective
should be crime prevention as opposed to putting in place methods of punishing the minors that
commit crimes. My main solution to the problem is therefore: Focus more on crime prevention
as the minors are still young and willing to learn.
Solution
In any problem that is faced, there has always been more than one way of solving the
problem. For this situation, the fundamental issue is the expansion in the quantity of youthful
ones that are becoming serious criminals. This is a problem that is found in many of the places
where there are more and more minors that are being treated as if they were adults both in their
sentencing as well as in the jail system. However, the solution to helping solve the problem of
minors and crime should be focused more on the crime prevention part of the whole problem.
Considering that we are talking about minors, it is notable that all of them must have
missed some learning aspect for them to be able to end up in so many problems that requires for
them to be sentenced as an adult is sentenced. This means that it would be a good solution to
focus on teaching the young ones that crime is wrong so as to prevent them from getting into
crime in the future. This would include teaching them in the families as well as in the different
learning institutions where they may be schooling.
SOLUTION AND ADVANTAGES
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Advantages
Several advantages come with this solution. The first of this is that the children that are
prevented from committing crime are able to continue with their education. Education is
essential in today's general public as it ensures that a man can have high odds of landing a decent
job (Watkins, 2010). This has a reverse effect of reducing poverty and increasing the well being
of the society in general. By preventing the minors from committing crimes, we help them to be
able to continue with their education which is likely to greatly benefit them in the long term.
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