FIU Student Arrested for an Instagram Post Short Story Paper

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Business Finance

Florida International University

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Write an inverted pyramid news story using information from the quotes provided; pretend that you interviewed these people for the story, and this is what they told you. You don’t have to use all the information, only what you think is best. Make sure you have all the elements of a news story, including a headline, strong lead, attribution, and both direct and indirect quotes. The story should be fair and balanced. Do not make up any facts and/or quotes; work only with the information provided. IMPORTANT: Unless you’re using a direct quote, you must put the material into your own words. Do not copy and paste.


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6 03708-301M RUN-ON Spring Lake High School student arresting event NO CAP, An 18-year-old high school student was arrested at 7:30 a.m. in Spring Lake High School. The AND SAID X case involved the Orlando Police on duty. This happened because another student from the school, and called the police that the man had posted something disturbing on his Instagram account. The man was holding something that looked like a semiautomatic handgun, and the caption was: "Look out, there's gonna be a lot of excitement at school tomorrow." > HAS NO THIS DOESN'T MAKE SENSE After the man was arrested and brought to the police station, he said that it was a water pistol. The officers searched the house, and found the water pistol, they made sure it was a joke. Also, because he is only 18 years old and has no prior criminal record, he is being charged with a misdemeanor. “If he's found guilty, he could spend up to six months in jail or pay a fine of up to $1,000. He should probably consider himself lucky, though, The officer said. NO CAP NEVER SAY SOMETHING LIKE THIS WHY LUCKY ? * WHEN SOMEONE STUMBLES OVER THEIR WORLDS, он EITHER CUT OUT THAT PART OR USE AN INDIRECT QUOTE IN STEAD ATTRIBUTION * From this event, his father told us:" I know he should...he needs to be punished, but arresting a kid in the middle of class and then locking him up for posting a picture is too harsh. > At the same time, the principal of Spring Lake High School also said " I've known him for four years, and he's basically a good kid. Honestly, I think he was just trying to get attention and used some really poor judgement. KEEP TO ONE IDEA PER ракастары PUT QUOTES FROM DIFFERENT PEOPLE iN SEPARATE PARAGRAPHSELEMENT HEADLINE GRAMMAR MECHANICS SPELLING PUNCTUATION PLATE ADHERENCE TO AP STYLE QUOTES SOURCES ATTRIBUTION OBJECTIVITY 1123 CRITERIA for of nume Headline follows all the t guidelines; short, simple, clear, strong, with emphasis on main points of the story Errors are so few that minor touch-ups would allow this piece to be published. Spelling, punctuation, grammar, and capitalization are correct. Paragraphs are short, mostly 1-2 sentences. AP style rules are followed. botigur 7 POSSIBLE POINTS POINTS 4 3 4 4 RECEIVED The sources of the quotes are clear. Quotes are relevant and add interest and meaning to the story. They are placed in the appropriate places. Both direct and indirect quotes are used. Punctuation and citation rules for quotes are followed. Attribution is given Soma in all instances. The story is written from an outsider's viewpoint and does not editorialize. Opinions are carefully cited to others. The writer tries to 2 show all sides of the story. 2 5 3 3 4 to REASON THE READER WON'T UNDERSTAND WHAT'S HAPPENING SEE NOTES ON PAGE FACTUAL MISTAKES (-10 POINTS FOR EACH): LOMCEVIC MIC пw оноогов со кликнои | OW ww 12: .:MO THE DICIENT VICE MENCIONS OBEN NEVOIENT BOBEBI 4INITIAL POINTS: ELEMENT LEAD INVERTED PYRAMID STYLE Onoure aurs ORGANIZATION FLOW LOVNOM CONTENT BODY MIG2 WORDINESS CHE 26 LO VS 140 CRITERIA is arou RE-WRITE POINTS: Strong, crisp, captivating, clear. All important facts are included. Doesn't start with a locator or a date. All five Ws are answered. Story is written in inverted pyramid style. All facts are given in order of importance, not chronologically. Nothing important is left out. There is no ending. 101 The structure is clear and easily moves the reader through the text. Transitions show how the ideas connect. Organization is good. The a writer clearly understands the facts. The reader's questions are anticipated and answered. Notes are not copied and pasted. Writing is tight and simple without a lot of unneeded words. 16 MAXIMUM POINTS POINTS 4 6 8 BO La /40 RECEIVED 2 Ġ CEIAED REASON SUBMITTED ON TIME FINAL POINTS: /40 WAY TOO LONG AND OVERLOADED AND HAS NO ATTRIBUTION EVERY NAME is MissiNG FROM THIS STORY, INCLUDING THE NAME OF THE PERSON THE STORY is ABOUT. NEEDS MUCH BETTER ORGANIZATION AND STRUCTURE
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