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I'm preparing for a test called GRE, and part of it is to write and essay. I'm not a native english speaker so basically I need someone to review the grammar, composition, the essay's structure and rate on a scale from 0 to 6 according on a rubric I'm attaching on the essay.
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During the last 30 years, developing countries have experimented a phenomenon where people
from small towns and rural areas have migrated to the bigger cities, as part of a search for new
opportunities and a better life quality. This fact has as a consequence that most of the population
of less developed countries live in major cities. In the case of developed countries, the phenomenon
of internal immigration happened probably at the beginning of the last century, and is possible to
say that internal immigration is a permanent ongoing process in most countries in the world.
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