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Temple University Public Fashion Show Media Advisories Paper

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Hi, I'm a foreign student, so it is hard for me to be creative on writing. Could you please help me correct my grammar mistakes and make my content more concise and interesting to read? (Everything in the press release and media advisory could be fictional) Thank you.

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Contact: -Bloomingdale’s & Meek Mill hosts 2020 fashion show to support Philadelphia emerging designers -15 Philadelphia emerging designers’ debut show -Entertainment will be provided by Meek Mill -Fashion show featuring the color of 2020: Classic Blue When Saturday, March 7, 2020 5:00 p.m. - 7:00 p.m. Who Bloomingdale’s and Philadelphia based rapper Meek Mill hosts the 2020 Spring/Summer fashion show. The Fashion show will provide stage for 15 Philadelphia emerging designers to showcase their debut trending designs. What 1.The fashion show’s keynote will be classic blue, the color of the year for 2020. 15 emerging Philadelphia fashion designers will present a visual feast of peace and grace combining one of the most popular 2020 trend, color denim. 2. Meek Mill will perform his new single during the fashion show and will give a speech to share his insights on fashion, including his determination to give back to Philadelphia and support talented newcomers 3.Celebrities and fashion influencers are invited to the fashion show. They will walk the red carpet, sign their names on the carpet signature wall and take pictures in front of the signature wall. The interview session will be provided. Why -Bloomingdale's has been dedicated to discovering fashion trends and excellent rookie designers in the fashion industry. -Meek Mill is not only a music visionary, but also a style icon and activist. As a Philadelphia based rapper, he also has been dedicated to giving back to Philadelphia, finding great new talent and helping them. Where 160 N Gulph Rd, King of Prussia, PA 19406 Instagram bloomingdales meekmill Contact: (Write for press release) Bloomingdale’s & Meek Mill hosts 2020 fashion show to supporting Philadelphia emerging designers -Entertainment will be provided by Meek Mill -15 Philadelphia emerging designers will showcase their trending designs with the 2020 color of the year theme King of Prussia, Pa. (February 6, 2020) -- Bloomingdale’s today announces that its 2020 Spring/Summer fashion show will be held on March 7, in the King of Prussia Mall. The purpose of hosting this fashion show is to provide opportunities for 15 local emerging designers to showcase their designs, but also introduce the most trending clothes and accessories to the customer. The event is dedicated to bringing together different emerging designers belonging to all types of skill levels and belonging to various age groups in Philadelphia. Giving them a platform to show their excellent designs. The event is dedicated to show Bloomingdale’s’ support to new emerging fashion designers and the fashion industry. These designers will bring unprecedented visual feast to the audience. The event will also feature Philadelphia rapper Meek Mill and Lil Uzi Vert. The fashion show will live streaming on YouTube. The Bloomingdale’s customers will get a 10% off code if they show they post the picture with the clothes or accessories that they think is the most trending in 2020 with #Bloomingdales2020fashionshow. The discount code can be used in all Bloomingdale's stores or online store by the end of March. About Bloomingdale's: “Bloomingdale's Inc. is an American luxury department store chain. It was founded by Joseph B. and Lyman G. Bloomingdale in 1861. It is committed to once again lead the way with exclusive merchandise, customized services, and alternative shopping venues.” ### ...
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Contact:
-Bloomingdale's & Meek Mill hosts 2020 fashion show
to support Philadelphia emerging designers
-15 Philadelphia emerging designers' debut show
-Meek Mill will provide entertainment
-A fashion show featuring the colour of 2020: Classic Blue
When Saturday, March 7, 2020
5:00 p.m. - 7:00 p.m.
Who Bloomingdale's and Philadelphia based rapper Meek Mill hosts the 2020
Spring/Summer fashion show. The Fashion show will provide the stage for 15
Philadelphia emerging designers to showcase their debut trending designs.
What 1. The fashion show's keynote will be classic blue, the colour of the year
for 2020. Fifteen emerging Philadelphia fashion designers will present a visual
feast of peace and grace, combining one of the most popular 2020 trend, colour
denim.
2. Meek Mill will perform his new single during the fashion show and will give a
speech to share his insights on fashion, including hi...

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