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Running head: IDENTIFYING AN ACCEPTABLE PARAPHRASE
Identifying an acceptable paraphrase
IDENTIFYING AN ACCEPTABLE PARAPHRASE
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Ravitch notes that originally charter schools were supposed to reach at-risk students with
better strategies and creative teachers. These teachers would then also find ways to share these
innovations with more traditional public schools (22).
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Paul Revere’s well-known ride is the best example in history of a word-of-mouth
epidemic. His piece of important information covered a long distance in no time, preparing large
numbers of neighbors for battle. However, Gladwell states, not every word-of-mouth epidemic
is this significant. Yet even given our era of mass media and advertisements, word of mouth is
“the most important form of human communication” (32).
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