UCF Perusall Critiques Discussion

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WK 3A Perusall Critiques your group's Writing Assignment Essay #2

Perusall Critiques: After the Writing Assignment: Essay #2 drafts have been uploaded to Blackboard, I will move those drafts to a Perusall Group folder under "Library." It used to be under "Documents," but Perusall decided to change names midway through this course! (This is all accessible via Blackboard), and you will be responsible for critiquing each of your group’s essays, including at least two specific positive comments and two specific suggestions for improvements. Each post counts as ONE comment.

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Essay#2 – Broken legs
Essay#3
What to wear to go out


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Essay #2
Broken Legs
A dark day in your life, you were going on the road with your brother and mother to
your hometown San Cristobal, Venezuela. Your dad wasn’t there, instead someone strange
was driving. Your mum had recently got a driver, this guy was weird sometimes. In the car,
there was your younger brother, mother, driver, and your beloved dalmatian, Manchas. You
loved this dog so much, because he made you happy when you were alone. Anyways, you
were always a very happy kid, always picking up the balls from baseball practices and
running around to ask a question. In fact, you could not stop fighting your brother when you
were in the car with him, to the point your mom had to put you in the front seat with her. At
some point of the trip, you were so excited to get home that you jumped to the front seat, and
you couldn’t stop saying “How long until we get there”.
All suddenly, everything went dark, you could not see anything or hear anything, you
were wondering why you had so many pieces of broken glass on your face and why you
could not see your family. You were wondering if this was a dream or a nightmare.
Everything happened so quickly and there was you in the hospital, realizing that you were in
car accident and that you almost lost your ...


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