Hi, I need your help again:D
In an essay of 700 – 1,000 words, explain the controversy over
design piracy in the fashion industry, and give your opinion on
the issue. Base on the TEDx video and two attached passages.
fashion piracy paradox.docx
Before Models can Turn Around.docx
It is due on Wednesday 11am. September 18. More time for you this time lol.
Hers's the Goals of the assignment:
-An effective thesis statement (that passes the ‘so what’ test)
a. Logical order
b. Follow your theme and CI
c. Consistency of person and number
- Integration of class materials
- Improvement on specified language points
PS: I love your last essay, you' ve done great job, but here are some problems. Please pay attention to the logic and the organization of the whole passage and use more transition sentences, break the paragraphs and paraphrase the sentences from the given materials.
Thanks a lot and I really appreciate it.