Interpersonal professional communciation

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Discuss the following: this week u will discuss how u would rewite the sentences for brevity and professional.

Discuss how to revise the following sentences;

1. In the event there is a emergency we will contact your emergency contact listed.

2. He stopped going to class on account of the fact that it was necessary for him to get a new car because his car broke down.

3. In respect of what u said, I do agree that the new healthcare law is now going to be effectived to the number of people without money it is affecting.

4.In the company that I work for there are wide-open opportunities for professional development and it a company that enjoys an enviable record for stability in the dynamic atmosphere of healthcare.


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